W-Ode To 50 Wives Bred To Worship the Polygamous Prophet

Strophe

The polygamist had a big house                                        
Where he chose to warehouse hundreds of girls
And women including 29 stepmothers, his father’s spouses
56 of the girls were each other’s sisters.
And 24 were under the age of seventeen.           
Some of the young wives even assisted passions
The pedophile with his sexual assaults 
Telling the girls that if they refused to please his preen
In what he dubbed the “heavenly sessions”
They would be “rejected by God’s favorite cult.

Antistrophe

Wives were both the victims of his abuse
And the accomplices subjected to a cruel
World of worship and sexual abuse
And were so indoctrinated and used cool.
Who cruelly bred them for manipulation.
Calling himself the ‘humble servant’ of God
Asking the girls to please God to atone community’s sins
Oh, the wives of the notorious polygamist’s predation
Into the twisted world of subjugation fold
With which he surrounded himself amidst the teens.

Epode

Had a wisdom tooth for his sexual gratification
Raping the young girls in his big house to make housewives
The State of Texas has a big house for lamentation
Where he will spend the rest of his life’s cloves 
Well, he will have plenty of time to repent.
And think deeply on the meaning of life
Out of the 50 wives none of the parents got relief
Where are the parents of these young girls tormented?
Does that mean all were brainwashed for strife?
So scary that pedophilia can be masked as religious belief.
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Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place win in :
Contest: A Toothful Ode by nancy jones

** This is the English Ode, also called the Homostrophic or Horatian Ode. 
The Romantic Ode often followed the Irregular Ode's structure 
and the Homostrophic Ode's meditative quality.

Rhyme Scheme : ABABCDECDE (Ten lines)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rutherford Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Indisputably a wonderwork of poetry Dr. Ram !!Congratulations, well deserved win here. Anne
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 12:41 PM
My compliments Ram, on a marvelous poem, just amazing and a big congratulations on your first place win ~~
Devnath  Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Dr. congratulation for grand win, I had a smell of fragrance from your write. Thanks, bl
Williams Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 3:44 AM
Dr.Ram congrats on your win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones my friend. CR
Foster Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:55 PM
It is sad that in this troubled world so many wrongs are touted as religion. A stunning write Dr Ram well worthy of this top place. regards Margaret
Johnson Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on a great win. hard subject to take on. Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 4:43 PM
fantastic! wow Ram such an important powerful write! congrad's light & love
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM
CONGRATS DR. RAM ON NUMBER ONE WIN WITH AWESOME POEM MY FRIEND..LUV..
Jones Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:36 PM
This is skin-crawlingly brilliant, Dr. Ram. Thanks so much for writing it and supporting my contest. Namaste~N
Freeman Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 8:59 PM
It is sad that this kind of thing is basically accepted in some religious beliefs, Dr Ram. It is lust of the flesh quite simple. Moses
Francis Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 2:54 PM
this is what happens all round us in the name of religion and culture where little kids under the age of 10 are being giving out for marriage.hope the world will stand up against this abuse. nice write up.
Kriticos Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 2:37 PM
a chilling thought, that these men are able to dupe a whole community. You are a very versatile writer, Dr. Ram. It is not without the provocation of thought that we read your work!
Devonshire Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 1:26 PM
This is most likely based on a true character, Dr. Ram. I deplore this type of lifestyle and am blad he's in the Texas "big house" for the rest of his days. I pity the women who were subjected to such abuse. You have mastered the Ode form, Dr. Ram. I read up on it and found it too challenging, but you really succeeded! So much work went into this wwrie and you produced a masterpiece. Love, Carolyn
Devnath  Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:38 PM
H! master, friend, You are so high that my eyes feel tired when they see for long time in depth. Differentiation created nicely. Thanks. bl
Ball Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 11:05 AM
You really seem to be a master of form my friend. I'm not very good at it myself. This was excellent. I believe a poem should have a message and this has a good one. Loved it. God will get those who use Him to abuse His Children. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:06 AM
A lot of work put into this one, Dr. RAm. Sure to do well in the contest.I am not sure if this is the same polygamist that I just heard a recording of on a radio talk show , but the man recorded had this sickening voice, claiming to be a "righteous prophet" telling all the women what to do for him. Gag me with a spoon. Poor misguided foolish people that followed him!
Song Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 2:48 AM
Oh my word! Are u kiddin me?
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:01 AM
And I couldn't keep one. Maybe he can be someone's 'wife' in prison. Your poem is so well constructed.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:45 PM
most excellent breakdown of the ode Dr. Ram with this tale of horror and deceit.. happens all too often in many societies..good luck in the contest luv..
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:38 PM
This is a truly magnificent poem Dr.Ram! You pulled off the Ode rather easily!! It is truly a sad occurrence when things like in this poem happen. They should keep him locked up for the rest of his life! I really liked your write!!
Stella Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 9:56 PM
holy wow my friend mine wont even come close to yours you have meet this challenge very well also thansk for your always sweet comments to my works blessings to you and family Dr Ram hugs dear friend
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