Wnd Pushes the Leaves Haiku

wind pushes the leaves tumbling them against the door.... mouse scurries under

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2011 6:52:00 AM

Didn't I see this one somewhere before? The mouse had better avoid the cat. Again, a good entry.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/3/2011 12:46:00 PM

My goodness, LNC, we sure do think alike. I wrote one a couple months ago for Andrea's haiku contest in which a field mouse ran into a home using a cat door. This is SOOOO cute! Best wishes in Charles' contest, dear. I gave the "dark prose" a try and saw your comment on HG's entry. I tend to think prose is prose and poetry is poetry, but it was a challenge trying to write in a "dark" style as we discussed. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 4:54:00 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Barbara. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/2/2011 7:06:00 PM

Ahhh....love this little poem.....what a sweet little painting you have created!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/2/2011 8:22:00 AM

Very good images and sounds pour from this Haiku....excellent my dear...luv Michael