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wnd pushes the leaves haiku

wind pushes the leaves tumbling them against the door.... mouse scurries under

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Date: 1/8/2011 6:52:00 AM
Didn't I see this one somewhere before? The mouse had better avoid the cat. Again, a good entry.
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:46:00 PM
My goodness, LNC, we sure do think alike. I wrote one a couple months ago for Andrea's haiku contest in which a field mouse ran into a home using a cat door. This is SOOOO cute! Best wishes in Charles' contest, dear. I gave the "dark prose" a try and saw your comment on HG's entry. I tend to think prose is prose and poetry is poetry, but it was a challenge trying to write in a "dark" style as we discussed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:54:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:06:00 PM
Ahhh....love this little poem.....what a sweet little painting you have created!!
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:22:00 AM
Very good images and sounds pour from this Haiku....excellent my dear...luv Michael
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