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Without My Soup

*WITHOUT THE SOUP....... > * * * * > * > > > * * * v * < haiku's < moon >>>>> planet < sonnet planet < * > free < > * verse < ##### * > # # SOUP ## > lyric <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< < # # SUN # # ##### * >>> < * monoku's >>> senryu * planet moon satellite quatrain >>>> planet >>>> planet * tanka rhyme >>> .... MY POETRY, MY HEART, WILL BE LOST IN SPACE.... ___________________________________________________________________

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Date: 2/25/2012 9:24:00 AM
Wow! What a creative way to express your feelings about the Soup. Congrats on your 1st place win, Carrie! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie, with this wonderful, creative write, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:54:00 AM
Well done many congrats on a big win xx
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Date: 2/23/2012 10:40:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a great win for these true words about our site luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 PM
Clever rendition and happy win. congratulaitons Carie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:31:00 PM
So creative!!! Nice win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest *Carrie*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:01:00 PM
Carrie congratulations, this was stunningly clever, loved it..David
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Date: 3/26/2010 12:57:00 PM
What a creation, enjoyed reading this and also had to read this again. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:01:00 AM
love it!!
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Date: 3/22/2010 11:52:00 AM
what an explorer but don't forget the other galaxies!
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:33:00 PM
woooooooooow! my friend this is a great visual to this verse....... and yes you are a poet, a great poet!
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Date: 3/20/2010 3:20:00 PM
Very cool, Carrie!! Looks like fun! Have a great day! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:11:00 PM
Great design...Keep the creative type flowing..Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:56:00 AM
Igive you the highest mark for the architecture as well as the poem. Sheesh, I feel so small now! Wow! Imagine the schematics that wewnt intgo this? Fine work and I'm sure it was! I'm glad that you liked the singing. I love those cartoons. They are the finest that this country has ever produced, bar none. ( Yes, I know about Tom and Jerry and Fleischer Brothers Popeye and Superman.) They are great as well. But these have to be the best. Thanks for your comment! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/16/2010 9:37:00 AM
VERY VERY NICE LOVED IT AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS FALESHIA
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:38:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:02:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:39:00 AM
This is an awesome design.. Good response.....:JP]
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:50:00 AM
Hey! You are in orbit with this one. Love, daver
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Date: 3/15/2010 1:05:00 AM
Very inventive Carrie.ongrats on your recent contest success.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:22:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:52:00 PM
Carrie, did you see I did your tag game very quickly. I remembered a poem of mine that fit the theme and tweaked the last few lines so I could finish with I am a poet. Which makes it sound a bit odd I suppose, but oh well. . . . WE poets have to improvise a lot! Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:41:00 PM
Carrie, What an inventive clever poem! Your placing of words and your word placing deserve applause! Very astute observation from you.... a perfect poet! Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:15:00 AM
You named it all - the poet's universe is really an adventure to sail through, Carrie! Great Shape!!! Wishing you a nice week ahead and thank you for your comments...Love, Gert
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