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Without Love

It would cloud the sun forever
in one instant the sea would dry
shift the axis of the earth
as a weak crystal
all of this would happen!
resulting in death
cover me with its funereal crepe
but you could never shut me
from the flame of your love...

Last night I dreamed
we were standing in cold grey weather
under the proudest stars
no escape from the ocean breeze
we looked beyond
as the pale moon put on a white cloth...
~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/22/2014 11:39:00 PM
Very romantic and beautiful, the last line brilliant " as the pale moon put on a white cloth" A7 here
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/22/2014 11:45:00 PM
Much appreciated Arthur!
Date: 11/14/2014 7:27:00 AM
my, this one hits hard as your piece delves deep into love's meaning, ken.. great one!.. hugggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/14/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Nette for stopping by!
Date: 11/13/2014 9:25:00 PM
wow, I love the imagery blended with this unworldly atmosphere!! stunning
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 9:47:00 PM
Thank you for visiting Andrea! Ken
Date: 11/13/2014 10:59:00 AM
Good dream..Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 11/13/2014 5:12:00 AM
I love how you express yourself in this piece. Whatever happen around us, it is amazing to still be able to do the one thing that one call love. :) A job well done Ken. Regards "B"
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely visit "B"
Date: 11/13/2014 4:59:00 AM
Great Imagery Ken. a 7 from me
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Jasmine for the kind review!
Date: 11/13/2014 4:58:00 AM
it would be a dark place without love i can clearly see excellent pen dear pal bless you
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Liam old friend!
Date: 11/13/2014 3:10:00 AM
beautiful imagery - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 11/13/2014 1:22:00 AM
What a beautiful piece you've penned here Ken! Without love nothing is really worthwhile love is the real force that brings real meaning to everything in the end. Love makes everthing just complete! A 7 from you. Enjoyed it! :) Love and light! xxx D.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Dorian!
Date: 11/13/2014 12:38:00 AM
Ken, beautiful, romantic write!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/13/2014 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man!