Notes About The Poem

         (This is the 2nd of a Quadriptych set of Poems on Peace)

Without Justice, a Child Becomes a Bullet

Peace is not a final state  
Peace is not a promised land  
Peace is a direction  
a discipline  
a daily  
  refusal of hate  

The sociopath exists  
The sadist masks up
The profiteer of suffering  
lives next door  

The work of peace is not to erase evil  
but to build systems strong enough  
to contain it  
detect it  
dismantle it  
before it metastasizes  
  through tissue  

Justice is not peace's opposite  
it is its prerequisite  

The trafficker must be stopped  
The abuser must face consequences  
The war criminal must be held to account  
Peace without justice is not peace  
it is surrender  
  painted flat  

Yet justice alone is not enough  
Walls crack like old craniums  
Locks break like crystal goblets  
Surveillance falters like failing hearts  

Evil seeps through the smallest crevice  
Because evil is not only in men  
it lives in systems  
in cultures  
in the poisoned soil  
  of neglect  

Carl Jung warned us  
"The world hangs on a thin thread  
and that thread is the psyche of man"  

The shooter was once a boy  
isolated like an island  
radicalized like a slow toxic poison  
armed like a walking war machine  

The gang member was once a child  
who saw violence as his only shield  
against a world that showed him  
nothing but  
  its teeth  

The abuser was once abused  
The soldier was trained to dehumanize  

This does not excuse  
it explains  

Explanation is the first algorithm  
toward prevention  
before the next boy becomes a bullet  
before the next scream is normalized  

I have seen what peace without justice becomes  
I have sat with its aftermath  
I have listened to its brokenness  
and it does not heal  
it waits  
  to repeat
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Edmonds  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 12:46 PM
A marvellous write Daniel. Evil gets passed on down the line, whereas kind hearts raise beautiful people… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:08 AM
Dear Beryl, Thank you, and yes, we need more people with beautiful minds who want to make a difference. Autumn Blessings, Dear Beryl, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Oh I was so sure I had commented to this already yet I see no comment of mine here. Brilliant message and writing
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Dear Andrea, I am just glad that you found it. It is always a great joy to see your smiling comments. Autumn Blessings, Dear Andrea, Daniel
Manassian Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 11:32 AM
What a thought provoking write. In this part of the world, we are in dire need of peace. That comes as a cost. Understanding why we've come to this place is essential so that history doesn't repeat itself. Your poem is excellent in every way. Truly brilliant. Thank you for sharing. Also, thank you for your visit to my POTD. Blessings
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Dear Eileen, appreciate you connecting the poem to the dire need for peace in your part of the world, and that observation that peace "comes at a cost." That deep need to understand the historical path that brought us to this difficult place, to prevent history from repeating itself, is such a critical insight. I'm incredibly grateful Autumn Blessings, Dear Eileen, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Another thoughtful poem, Daniel. I like the realistic, pragmatic mindset, peace is a direction.
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Hello David, It is always a pleasure to see your comments, and yes, peace is a direction that we need to believe in more. Autumn (Spring) Blessings, David, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:19 AM
Great write! You have thought this through as you’ve processed the information you receive. God knows are hearts; when they are tested what will happen. Some can be saved from their ordeals; others drill down on hardness of the heart. Still, we don’t know which hearts might be plowed, reseeded, and saved, so we listen, encourage, love above all. Hugs!
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Dear Kim, What a beautiful, deeply thoughtful response. Thank you. You picked up exactly on that idea of processing the information, the whole poem came from wrestling with those tough questions about what happens when hearts are truly tested. Because we don't know the outcome, all we can do is what you said: listen, encourage, and love above all. That's the whole point. Thanks for your wisdom and encouragement. Autumn Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Bayles Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Very timely and timeless, Daniel. O how the poem speaks to you. If only this poem reaches the right person and saves a life.
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Hello Mike, I think that is why we as poets try to make life a little better for the reader, whether it is entertaining or educating. If one life is changed for the better, then that is a start. Thank You! Autumn Blessings, Mike, Daniel
Maverick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:24 AM
As I read Daniel... Well we know what we know yo.) As it goes i mentioned a Way of 'building a system?) Maybe too Grand a term.? Yet you'll remember.' How I hope.' We can all learn.? May better days be yours.'
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Hello Joe, I am thankful for your visit and your words. I will always hold out hope, and as a mental health and substance abuse counselor, I ask God that I can make a difference in many lives. Autumn Blessings, Joe, Daniel
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Evil is an inherent flaw of our cultural cells, a framework of paradise lost; we’re just planting the damned. Aloha, my friend.
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Hello HP, evil is inherent and becomes the sins of our fathers that have come down through the ages. Soon it will be our sins to pass down unless we can make a difference to bring a life worth living to every man, woman, and child. I am a praying man and have hope of something better. Thank You! Autumn Blessings, HP, Daniel
Messina Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 3:35 PM
We're fighting a losing battle, Daniel. People can't trust leadership anymore, and for good reason. The boy grown bullet seems to be living an ongoing life as he had since the beginning of time. Let us pray :) A GREAT, great write again, dear friend. Blessings
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Hello Charles, we are fighting a battle that can never be won until the end of time. Yes, only a miracle coming from our God can save us from ourselves. I left my first career in IT to become a counselor because I wanted to help people find a better life worth living. Thank you! Autumn Blessings, Charles, Daniel
Maverick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:27 AM
Prayer is a great key.'
Anaya Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 11:15 AM
In 1934 Carl went on German radio not just to support Hitler, but to affirm that Jews are different from the rest of us etc….an antisemitic before the full effects of the Holocaust, the point being is even an icon like Carl can change his perspective & evil may arise in the most unexpected places. The effects of gross injustice smolder gen. after gen. until justice is realized. Leadership, he sets the example & that example trickles down and permeates our culture. I truly appreciate this well delineated piece on peace, Daniel & I truly believe it’s how we vote that makes a difference in our culture, & how willing we are to demonstrate our points of view. :)
Rodgers Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Dear Anaya, Thank you for giving the piece such a thoughtful and searching read. I genuinely appreciate your connection to those huge, uncomfortable historical and societal currents. Your introspection here goes right to the core of what I was trying to grapple with the unsettling truth that leadership and the capacity for both light and darkness can arise and influence culture in the most unexpected ways. It’s feedback like this that makes the whole process worthwhile. Thank you for always bringing that critical, compassionate lens to the conversation. Autumn Blessings, Dear Anaya, Daniel
Narain Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Nice poem on the current state of life.
Rodgers Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Hello Jay, thank you my friend, Autumn Blessings, Jay, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Creative work you have written on some relevant topics of this day in which we live. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Dear Sara, You and I are old enough to know what the 60s brought in violence and not just here in the USA but worldwide. I guess every generation that comes on the scene does not learn from the prior generation that we pray for Peace, Love, and Understanding, helping our fellow humans navigate the world around us. Thank you, as always, for your comments. Autumn Blessings, Dear Sara, Daniel
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