Without Hue

Without Hue

WHITE
a sign in all caps meaning
forbidden
first class
clean and more importantly correct.
Bedsheets and tablecloths
flowing in the night 
with madness most great
slowly blanketing the world’s peoples
in a snow of blond descent
while faces of the past that tainted African blood 
stare back from the 21st century reflection 
ever reminding that BROWN is a composite color.

BLACK
blindness that walks into a brick wall
songs of agony as tears stream down sweat laden faces
tempered by sun and strain
midnight with bleakness unimaginable.
Red and green Seventies' fists held pridefully
in defiant propriety as a word
became transformed from scorn to unity. 
Ebony oneness that sounded better than
*****, 
dying quietly into African-American.

BLACK is having no color, without hue.
WHITE is having no color, without hue.
Doesn’t that sound the same to you?

1/21/18
What is White?
Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi
5th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 1/25/2018 7:08:00 PM
Very powerfully expressed, Janis, with great last lines...yes, sounds the same for sure. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:47:00 PM
Well done, Janis. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 1/23/2018 8:20:00 PM
Polished work, from a mature human being ;) You know the quote I raised myself & my son by "If you are not part of the solution you are part of the problem." Guess who said that? ;) Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2018 2:54:00 PM
Love the ending! We are all the same!
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Date: 1/23/2018 2:08:00 PM
Sounds the same to me Janice, surprised this didn't place higher, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful visit. I enjoyed this winning piece.
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Date: 1/23/2018 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on you win, Janis, nicely done. As time passed changing not only height , but also color at the end everything. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/22/2018 12:23:00 PM
you said it all dear poet for we are all nothing more than skin-covered souls
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Date: 1/22/2018 8:36:00 AM
Great message Janis.. well said..
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Date: 1/21/2018 6:50:00 PM
You awoke to something there, more profound than most can imagine...Great poem Janis
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