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Without Hope's Gleam

The flower that is given little light tastes not enough of joy and cannot thrive - then fades away like dusk into the night. The soul who struggles just to stay alive - much like the flower wilting in the dark - tastes not enough of joy and cannot thrive. How can a fire be lit if there’s no spark? Without hope’s gleam, the soul will waste away - much like the flower wilting in the dark. This is the plight of one whose world is grey: Though others say a paradise exists - without hope's gleam, the soul will waste away. A man upon this earth who tastes no bliss is like a soul brought low who droops his head though others say a paradise exists. How sad that someone rather would be dead! The flower that is given little light is like a soul brought low who droops his head, then fades away . . . like dusk into the night. Written 11/15/12 For the "Hope" Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish and now for the contest of Nathan A

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Date: 10/26/2016 2:55:00 PM
Lovely terzanelle, Andrea. The message of hope is even better than the beautiful words. Much love to you. RW
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Date: 9/4/2013 10:56:00 PM
kudos Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/4/2013 8:11:00 PM
very nice terzanelle Andrea....congrats on your win
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:26:00 PM
lovely Andrea, you rock. congrats...SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:11:00 PM
powerful write that was beautifully crafted, congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
Good morning Andrea.... , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest...((ps... you can enter my contest if you want.. i won't hold it against you.. I love star trek tooo.....)) always...Linda
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Date: 12/12/2012 5:44:00 PM
Pssh... And you say terzanelles are hard... How'd it come so easy to you then??! AMAZING!
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:24:00 PM
An elegant poem to win in the Craig's "Hope" contest. This amazing poem toches the heart. I admire your ssadcomments on my Taka. Thank you. God Bless You. - Mohammad
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Date: 11/30/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Hope" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2012 3:20:00 PM
Sad but you know this is going into one of my fav. An awesome write. love phyl
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Date: 11/22/2012 12:38:00 PM
Well Andrea; its a sad one I'll give you that.." its bound to get a win; I'd rather read your happier ones though.."
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 AM
Hi, Andrea my dear friend! How are you? I hope you're fine. MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN MY FRIEND! love always, Leonora
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Date: 11/22/2012 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea ...Seren
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Date: 11/20/2012 10:46:00 AM
Great stuff, old buddy. Love, daver
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Date: 11/19/2012 2:55:00 PM
Andrea, ..love the gentel hope in your poem... congratulations with your wonderful win in Craig's contest... always~ PD
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:41:00 AM
Excellent write! Congratulations on your win my dear Andrea! love and hugs, LG
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:50:00 PM
I wish for you an orgasmic LIGHT!!!!Congrad's on your win in this difficult contest. Light & Love
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2012 5:36:00 PM
Way to go!! Excellent poem, congratulations on you win
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Date: 11/18/2012 5:36:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A MAGICAL WRITE ON HOPE AND A GRAND WIN TOO LUV .. U MASTERED THIS FORM BEAUTIFULLY LUV ..
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Date: 11/18/2012 3:30:00 PM
Good poem. I like it better than my entry. The imagery is great.
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Date: 11/18/2012 3:24:00 PM
great write Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2012 2:55:00 PM
This had me from the very beginning. So much insight and love throughout. An empty soul waits to be filled. But sadly, most only get billed. They can't afford to pay the price. Sad and hurt, it's hard to be nice. They search inside devoid of pride. Await their turn to ride. But time don't wait for any man. When they've already slid the slide. Congrats on your win Andrea. This is definately one of my favorites by you. Hug's.
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Date: 11/18/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! You've done it very well.
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations Andy, really well done ,this was a hard one and you cracked it xx
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