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Without Baggage

Reborn here now without baggage, I see my beautiful new home. I now have no more old damage, Here we are free to live and roam. A colorful heavenly sight, Reborn here now without baggage. I am in His wonderful light, It is a real advantage. I want no parts of the dragon, hear my many cries and this plea. Reborn here now without baggage, I am with you please set me free. I made it and I am now here, I now have new holy luggage. Heaven has become very clear. Reborn here now without baggage.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2023 6:55:00 AM

"3 Place" Without Baggage ~ Date Written:10/2/2021

Joseph May

Date: 12/4/2023 2:02:00 AM

A heavenly rebirth, Very nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2023 7:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my baggage write. I enjoyed writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thank You for having the contest/for the placement. Have a great/blessed day................

Valsa George

Date: 12/3/2023 11:49:00 PM

Baggage restricts our free movement ! The less luggage, the more comfortable. Your spiritual insight shines beautifully through your poem. Congratulations on your placement, dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2023 7:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my baggage write. Yes, bags can restrict our movement. Have a great/blessed day................

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/3/2023 6:25:00 PM

Dear Paula, your beautiful poem brims with reborn gratitude. A lovely spiritual piece. I adore your repeated line "Reborn here now without baggage" - splendid, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2023 7:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note, your kind words and for your congratulation. Glad you like my baggage write. Have a great/blessed day................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/22/2023 9:32:00 AM

Without Baggage ~ Date Written:10/2/2021

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/5/2021 11:10:00 PM

Holy baggage, nice...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this baggage write. Have a great/blessed day................

Brian Strand

Date: 10/5/2021 12:45:00 AM

Blessings for the.'race' Paula,the rewards of the first resurrection await

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. Have a great/blessed day................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/4/2021 7:58:00 PM

Interesting angle - 'without baggage.' So true. Let the Pharaohs populate their tombs with needless 'stuff.' ... :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day................

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2021 2:20:00 AM

Wonderful poetry, Paula, such strength you portray here.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2021 10:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................

Anil Deo

Date: 10/2/2021 9:55:00 PM

wonderful Paula: ""holy luggage for old "baggage." Yes, a big part of being "born again, "without [past] damage" (Shalom shalom Yeshua haMeshiach) anil

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/3/2021 8:38:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this "Without Baggage" write. Yes, I want my "holy luggage" filled with holy things. Hope I make it. Have a great/blessed day................

Judy Ball

Date: 10/2/2021 6:12:00 PM

Straight is the way and narrow the gate. Well worth it. Great stuff here Paula. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/3/2021 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. You are so very right, "Straight is the way and narrow the gate." Hope I make it. Have a great/blessed day................