Paula Goldsmith Poet Quatern

Without Baggage

Reborn here now without baggage,                                                                 I see my beautiful new home.                                                                          
I now have no more old damage,                                                              
Here we are free to live and roam.   


A colorful heavenly sight,                                                                       
Reborn here now without baggage.                                                                  I am in His wonderful light,                                                                            
It is a real advantage.   


I want no parts of the dragon,                                                                    hear my many cries and this plea.                                                           Reborn here now without baggage,                                                                  I am with you please set me free.   


I made it and I am now here,                                                                       I now have new holy luggage.                                                             
Heaven has become very clear.                                                            
Reborn here now without baggage.

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Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2023 at 6:55 AM "3 Place" Without Baggage ~ Date Written:10/2/2021

Joseph May December 4, 2023 at 2:02 AM A heavenly rebirth, Very nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2023 at 7:06 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my baggage write. I enjoyed writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thank You for having the contest/for the placement. Have a great/blessed day................

Valsa George December 3, 2023 at 11:49 PM Baggage restricts our free movement ! The less luggage, the more comfortable. Your spiritual insight shines beautifully through your poem. Congratulations on your placement, dear Paula ! Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2023 at 7:02 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my baggage write. Yes, bags can restrict our movement. Have a great/blessed day................

Susan Ashley December 3, 2023 at 6:25 PM Dear Paula, your beautiful poem brims with reborn gratitude. A lovely spiritual piece. I adore your repeated line "Reborn here now without baggage" - splendid, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2023 at 7:00 AM Thanks for your note, your kind words and for your congratulation. Glad you like my baggage write. Have a great/blessed day................

Paula Goldsmith November 22, 2023 at 9:32 AM Without Baggage ~ Date Written:10/2/2021

Delice Arleen Skelly October 5, 2021 at 11:10 PM Holy baggage, nice...Delice Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2021 at 9:52 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this baggage write. Have a great/blessed day................

Brian Strand October 5, 2021 at 12:45 AM Blessings for the.'race' Paula,the rewards of the first resurrection await Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2021 at 9:52 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. Have a great/blessed day................

Gershon Wolf October 4, 2021 at 7:58 PM Interesting angle - 'without baggage.' So true. Let the Pharaohs populate their tombs with needless 'stuff.' ... :) gw Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2021 at 9:50 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day................

Harry Horsman October 4, 2021 at 2:20 AM Wonderful poetry, Paula, such strength you portray here. Paula Goldsmith October 4, 2021 at 10:02 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................

Anil Deo October 2, 2021 at 9:55 PM wonderful Paula: ""holy luggage for old "baggage." Yes, a big part of being "born again, "without [past] damage" (Shalom shalom Yeshua haMeshiach) anil Paula Goldsmith October 3, 2021 at 8:38 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this "Without Baggage" write. Yes, I want my "holy luggage" filled with holy things. Hope I make it. Have a great/blessed day................

Judy Ball October 2, 2021 at 6:12 PM Straight is the way and narrow the gate. Well worth it. Great stuff here Paula. God Bless, JB Paula Goldsmith October 3, 2021 at 8:36 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. You are so very right, "Straight is the way and narrow the gate." Hope I make it. Have a great/blessed day................