Without a Word

eyes meet and recognition greets- retold,again, the novel unfolds

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/11/2009 7:14:00 AM

wow, so few words yet a story comes to life! I enjoyed this very much :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/3/2009 7:42:00 AM

recognition-- is slower these days as people age

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2009 6:50:00 AM

Compelling, Brian. I want to read this novel! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/3/2009 6:18:00 AM

So true! It is all i the eyes! Peace and love, Audrey

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2009 11:56:00 PM

The power of a single glance! And, the power of a few words. Great writing, Brian. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 7:44:00 PM

A touch of the romantic here? Brian.. deep emotion I feel.. nice write for the romantic in me... to read.. tonight.. thankxxx for sharing... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2009 1:58:00 PM

This is so true. The eyes have it. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2009 12:17:00 PM

star struck! Light & Love (much much better on the entry!) Light & Love

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/2/2009 9:28:00 AM

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