Within You

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within you, a reservoir of strength. a steadfastness you don't know you have. a bright l i g h t... shining deep inside. a f i r e... unkindled; a small s p a r k close to explosion! when the tough gets going, you... use all these as f u e l! (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. BRIAN'S CHOICE G,any form,any theme poetry contest Contest Judged: 5/17/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written: 05/16/2020

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John Hardison

Date: 5/17/2020 7:26:00 PM

Well said and simply stated. Thanks! We all need such a reminder. Peace, Love and Joy. Always

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/17/2020 8:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for the comments and visit, John:-)

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 5/17/2020 6:04:00 PM

Such a great write on a subject that is so important in all times, but especially in these times. Lonna

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/17/2020 7:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, Lonna:-)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/17/2020 3:24:00 AM

Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Sir Edward - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/17/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Greg:-) I appreciate the support and encouragement. Stay safe out there, my friend!