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Within the Oily Wonder

What wicked things wail this way? Nothing that I know of-- Only this cloaking curtain, This mooned and muted shadowland... All fright is found in non-disclosure Within the oily wonder, Punctured by scars and stars and Wounded well-wishers Wondering upon a sparrow'd wickedness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 12:20:00 PM
ok, now I see your style. It's the kind that I am not often able to emulate!! But I appreciate it and admire that you can write this way! Using unusual and imaginative images to protray your feelings! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2010 4:34:00 AM
Wounded well wishers wonderin upon a sparrow'd wickidness..love this verse..good poem indeed..Charma
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:23:00 AM
Interesting write. Sounds kinda scary. Sara
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