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Within heart and soul . . . is a tree, and each branch the drama; the history of my landscape, the branches . . . . my road map. I travel to childhood places, to long past memory; and beautiful headstones engraved, where tree . . . whispers to me. ____________________________ August 23, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Within My Soul Copyright Protected, 19-1175-338-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Choose An Octavio Paz Line sponsor, Nette Onclaud Inspiration Line - Octavio Paz 2. “There, within, inside my head, the tree speaks” – The Tree Within Fourth Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2019 10:46:00 PM

Dear Heart, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 1:09:00 PM

Eve thanks so much for the congratulations ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 5:17:00 PM

Gorgeous poem about memories, Constance . I really loved how you ended your poignant poem. Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 1:08:00 PM

Andre, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2019 7:55:00 AM

Within your soul lie sad memories, Constance. The trees and you ...an entwining of understanding. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 1:06:00 PM

Paul, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2019 1:26:00 AM

you write the saddest of songs, the most touching of scenes, constance... may you rise ever in the very fluid woods of life.., my sincerest thanks for joining this challenge with best congrats on your award... this was supposed to be the 1st on this slot but TPS has a mind of its own...hugggs

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 12:46:00 PM

Nette thanks for another inspiring contest and my placement. Yes I know PS plays with the placements

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 8/25/2019 9:31:00 AM

Very deep. Loved this write !!

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2019 12:44:00 PM

Swetha thanks for your kind comment