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Within My Garden Walls

There thrives within my garden walls an enchanting bloom that enthralls where this fragrant beauty grows Amidst its sweet scent, all others pale Sentiments of love will always prevail as morning dew clings to the rose

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John Gondolf

Date: 11/1/2021 10:51:00 AM

What a beautiful poem, Jenna, beautiful in it's simplicity. Nicely penned my friend. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/1/2021 4:43:00 PM

Thank you ever so sincerely for your comments, John.

Terry Flood

Date: 10/31/2021 7:45:00 AM

The rose sure takes some beating. We cut them for indoors and even after they’ve wilted they’re like fresh pot pouri. Always feel chuffed when a cutting takes. Lovely write, Jenna. Terry

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/31/2021 8:24:00 AM

Oh, I agree, Terry. I used to love gardening, but in an apartment I'm limited to ivy and those who grow by indirect window light. I agree that we cut their beauty for our joy. Seems a shame.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/30/2021 5:07:00 PM

Beautiful words and picture Jenna, if that is your garden wall I’m not surprised you are enthralled at all… Belle

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/31/2021 8:22:00 AM

Sorrowfully, I no longer have a garden, Belle. I now live in an apartment and can only grow indoor plants. Thanks for your kind thoughts.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/30/2021 2:45:00 PM

Being almost November I am surrounded by the fragrant narcissus. But the rose will always be a favourite.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/31/2021 8:21:00 AM

Oh how lovely for you. Thanks, Victor.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2021 12:47:00 PM

Well I'm inclined to agree Jenna, a beautiful flower without a doubt and a delight to catch the scent of it. Hope your day has gone well. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/31/2021 8:20:00 AM

My whole weekend is lovely, Tom. Great weather and great food. I've been cooking, so my larder is full. Hope your home improvement projects are complete. Thanks for the visit.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/30/2021 11:29:00 AM

Ah, nothing so beautiful, nor smells as sweet, as a red, red rose. Nice writing, Jenna. Love the way you rhymed it, too.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/30/2021 1:55:00 PM

It's delightful!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/30/2021 12:02:00 PM

Thanks. Thought I'd try something a different on the rhyme scheme... and it's NOT for a contest :)