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Within her heart is where I wish to be To dwell inside the garden of her soul Where each soft heartbeat plays a symphony And all around is beauty to behold The sunshine of her love would keep me warm My one desire, to take life's pain away Consoling her when clouds of sadness form Removing troubles of each stressful day Should something cause her fragile heart to break I'd gather up the pieces tenderly With love I'd smooth the sharpness of heartache Then put them back together lovingly Within her heart is where her beauty lies Her love, the light that shines within her eyes original poem by Daniel Turner

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Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/29/2017 5:04:00 PM

This is wonderful :) Yes this is love!

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/29/2017 5:09:00 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it:)

Jolene Cheyney

Date: 11/27/2016 5:35:00 PM

I still have great appreciation for this poem.

Yakubu Ibrahim

Date: 11/4/2016 5:30:00 AM

quite meritorious and very elusive sir.. carry on

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/4/2016 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Yukubu. I appreciate your kind comments:)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/2/2016 10:54:00 AM

Very tender and romantic poem, Daniel. A gorgeously expressed sonnet. Well done and kudos to you. Much love always to you. RW

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/2/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie. You are so kind. I appreciate your support:)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/31/2016 8:20:00 AM

Missed this one, sorry, what a treasure this sonnet is. An all time classic you can be proud of, I know too long for contest but would have won if entered. You truly have a gift of words, keep them coming.A fave for me too and a 7

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/31/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you, John. You really know how to make a guy feel good. I appreciate your kind comments.

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 10/29/2016 10:44:00 AM

Looks like you are melting hearts as you continue to add your flavor to the soup my friend. Yes Daniel, you should tell her how you feel!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 10:51:00 AM

I told her the minute she read the poem, I just never mentioned her name. Thank you, Jeannie for your kind comments. Really nice to see you:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/29/2016 2:28:00 AM

You are stealing hearts with this breathtakingly beautiful poem Daniel! A woman can only hope to be loved like this! This is one of your best and why it won Poet of the Week at Poetry for Thought October 8-14. This poem is "No ka Oi" (the best!) a seven and a fave from me Daniel. I was enchanted and teary eyed! Love, Connie : )

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 5:01:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Connie. I am humbled by your response:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2016 12:24:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem. Such sensitivity!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/21/2016 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. You're very sweet. i appreciate your kind comments:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/18/2016 1:46:00 AM

Simply wonderful, Daniel:) hope to see this high on the winners' list:) a 7:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/21/2016 2:05:00 PM

Thank you, Jo. Too many lines for contest. I appreciate your kind comments and high marks:)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/11/2016 10:20:00 PM

Wow this is great.....I loved it...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/15/2016 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, Pashang my friend:)

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 10/11/2016 12:21:00 AM

This is such a lovely sonnet....the title caught my attention....hope I can come up with some nice sonnet.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/11/2016 8:36:00 AM

Thank you, Meenakshi. I'm sure you will. Just let your feelings flow out onto the paper. You are very sweet. I appreciate your support.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/10/2016 2:44:00 PM

Hi Daniel, once more you place a most beautiful Sonnet before our eyes that makes the heart sing its own song of love as one reads. Such special words to speak your love my friend. This is an excellent Sonnet and it does move my heart to sing as i read. A true joy to read your words tonight. This has to be a fave and a seven my friend....Mike.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. I can't let you steal all of the ladies hearts:) I appreciate your kind comments my friend.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/10/2016 12:07:00 PM

This is tenderly sweet....so romantic. Just perfect.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 12:33:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. You're such a lady:) I appreciate your kind comments and support.

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2016 12:02:00 PM

An amazing love poem that obviously comes from a very special place in your heart for someone who also touches you in that affectionate place. Beautiful.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, Chris. Indeed! I appreciate your kind comments and support my friend:)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/10/2016 10:04:00 AM

Indeed...beautiful and romantic, Daniel! I love the end couplet! Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 10:25:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I really appreciate your encouraging support.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/10/2016 9:50:00 AM

I just adore your Sonnets, Daniel. This one, in particular, presents such beautiful imagery of deep, devoted and selfless love. A 7+ Fav for me! Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Sandra. You are so sweet. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for friendly visits and your continued support.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/10/2016 9:34:00 AM

I really enjoy well-written sonnets that convey a moving theme--like this one, Daniel! Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. I'm glad you liked it. I always appreciate your friendly visits and kind comments.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/10/2016 6:39:00 AM

Beautiful ... Nice Sonnet ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Probir. I appreciate your kind comments.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2016 4:15:00 AM

how enchanting are your sentimental lines, daniel... i'm so liking this sonnet!..huggs

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 7:35:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. I'm glad you liked it. I always enjoy your company. Thanks for dropping by and making an old man smile:)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2016 4:44:00 PM

Oh so so beautiful and romantic DT - I struggle to write this form and especially a romantic one like this!:-) hugs Jan xx7

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 4:46:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Don't sell yourself short. I seem to remember somebody recently getting poem of the day on her first attempt, wasn't it:) I really appreciate the lovely comments. Do you think I ought to tell her how I feel?

Jolene Cheyney

Date: 10/9/2016 4:24:00 PM

Her heartbeat is a symphony. Take all her pain and heartache and make them better. Such an exquisite poem, but those are my favorite parts.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 4:42:00 PM

Just think if you had a special someone inside your heart to mend and soothe, wouldn't that be better? Thank you for friendly visits Jolene. I really do appreciate your support.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2016 4:10:00 PM

A a beautiful romantic sonnet, Daniel! :-) Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Mrs Eve. I appreciate your kind comments and support.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/9/2016 3:57:00 PM

This is very beautiful DT. Giving me a run for my money. : )

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Tim. That'll be the day:)

Paloma P

Date: 10/9/2016 3:06:00 PM

'The garden of her soul'...sigh Beautiful sonnet.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 3:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paloma. It belongs to a beautiful person:) I appreciate your kind comments. See, when you're an old man like me, you can get away with stuff like this. LOL

Tony Devers

Date: 10/9/2016 2:39:00 PM

Nice to see someone keeping the sonnet form alive. A technically very adept and well crafted poem: I know how difficult this is to do, especially to execute it in such away that the poem seems as light and natural as the subject. I hope she, whoever she is, took this poem to her heart.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thank you, Tony. Wouldn't that be special! I appreciate your kind comments and support.