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Within Her Eyes

 Sun
Be Gone
Let Her face
befriend darkness 
so he may not seek
those lips of red that plead 
that beg , needy for his kiss
nor feel the aching for his touch
So he may not look within her eyes
and find there the afterglow of his love.



Brief Memories -For Flo's Contest

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Sandy Tadros

Date: 9/5/2017 10:22:00 AM

This is very beautifully written :)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 11:32:00 AM

Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.

Funom Makama

Date: 5/5/2016 1:15:00 PM

This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/27/2016 5:40:00 PM

Sweet words - and good use of the form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2016 7:16:00 AM

Uniquely creative..Enjoyed reading your emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 4/20/2016 2:10:00 PM

Beautiful, though sad; I feel you are saying 'Go' and yet deep down you plead "Come"....as if there is forbidden love involved. #7 Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/16/2016 12:40:00 AM

So,now its obvious Global warming is all your fault!!! You sure warmed me with this! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2016 2:38:00 PM

beautiful but sad etheree Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/15/2016 8:31:00 AM

So much passion in such a few lines. This must be a Poetic Quickie!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/14/2016 7:56:00 AM

Excellent. A beautiful and touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/13/2016 7:17:00 PM

In the afterglow of love a luminance of lust lives in the truth of two hearts, that need is not a want, that love is not a whim...your heart beats so dire in sweet panic Poetess, so warm in it's ache...the sensuality of your feelings is amazing in this brilliant poem my Lady Hawk...J.A.B. A FAV!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/13/2016 2:54:00 PM

Beautifully painted afterglow charmaine excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessing of a weekend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 4:03:00 PM

very interesting and well crafted etheree. Afterglow is a good thing and yet I sense negative images of not wanting him to see you beg. That makes it a very original idea!! Love when you write these short ones.

Anthony Mark

Date: 4/12/2016 1:19:00 AM

not sure about the first 2 lines, they seem disjointed, and not in keping with the write,...maybe " light - be gone " ??

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2016 10:44:00 AM