Charmaine Chircop Poet Etheree

Within Her Eyes

 Sun
Be Gone
Let Her face
befriend darkness 
so he may not seek
those lips of red that plead 
that beg , needy for his kiss
nor feel the aching for his touch
So he may not look within her eyes
and find there the afterglow of his love.



Brief Memories -For Flo's Contest

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Sandy Tadros September 5, 2017 at 10:22 AM This is very beautifully written :)

Funom Makama May 12, 2016 at 11:32 AM Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.

Funom Makama May 5, 2016 at 1:15 PM This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

Matthew Anish April 27, 2016 at 5:40 PM Sweet words - and good use of the form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2016 at 7:16 AM Uniquely creative..Enjoyed reading your emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Paul Callus April 20, 2016 at 2:10 PM Beautiful, though sad; I feel you are saying 'Go' and yet deep down you plead "Come"....as if there is forbidden love involved. #7 Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso April 16, 2016 at 12:40 AM So,now its obvious Global warming is all your fault!!! You sure warmed me with this! :)

Jan Allison April 15, 2016 at 2:38 PM beautiful but sad etheree Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux April 15, 2016 at 8:31 AM So much passion in such a few lines. This must be a Poetic Quickie!

Ravi Sathasivam April 14, 2016 at 7:56 AM Excellent. A beautiful and touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Justin Bordner April 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM In the afterglow of love a luminance of lust lives in the truth of two hearts, that need is not a want, that love is not a whim...your heart beats so dire in sweet panic Poetess, so warm in it's ache...the sensuality of your feelings is amazing in this brilliant poem my Lady Hawk...J.A.B. A FAV!

Liam Mcdaid April 13, 2016 at 2:54 PM Beautifully painted afterglow charmaine excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessing of a weekend

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2016 at 4:03 PM very interesting and well crafted etheree. Afterglow is a good thing and yet I sense negative images of not wanting him to see you beg. That makes it a very original idea!! Love when you write these short ones.

Anthony Mark April 12, 2016 at 1:19 AM not sure about the first 2 lines, they seem disjointed, and not in keping with the write,...maybe " light - be gone " ?? Charmaine Chircop April 12, 2016 at 10:44 AM I changed the second line..Yes took your advice on that, thanks. .But I prefer My Sun to your light : )..Sun Be gone....What do you think?.Thanks

Constance La France April 11, 2016 at 9:39 PM Charmaine, there is a sadness in this sultry write that touches the soul, I am loving it 7 ~

Daniel Turner April 11, 2016 at 5:45 PM Sad write Charmaine but well written. Peace pretty lady:)

Tim Smith April 11, 2016 at 4:49 PM Very sad piece Charmaine. I sense a loss of love...gives my heart a tug