Withernwick, Winter 1947

they dug a path down Church Lane
with walls that , to my child’s eye
seemed to rear up sheer and cold
as though reaching for the sky
at the extremes of my memory 
not much else is really clear
but some how in my mind
it remains a significant year

horses died , two great Shires
up to their shoulders in  snow
just yards away from stacked hay
yet yards too far for them to go;
they stood shoulder to shoulder,
great sad eyes opened wide to stare
as if into distant worlds well beyond
the ken of any villager gathered there.

in sadness, yet in celebration
of a hard winter now broken.
these poor dead horses
a small reminder, a token
of winter’s depth of power,
and soon to come a spring
with blossoms to burst to flower.
and we half forgot lanes blocked

by snow piled hedge top high
and every single step taken an ache
in a cold leg and straining thigh.
and those dead shire horses
long gone to the knackers’ yard
still drift back in memories
of that winter, long, deep and hard.

I’d stood  holding mam’s hand
and I remember that I cried 
maybe at the shock at seeing 
those two horses had died
they come back to me in dreams
still across those many years
and even now at time I shed
some silent and sad tears

so may years ago 
and my life has moved on
I’m the last of my generation
all the others are gone
nobody remebers those shires
and very few want to hear
about January 1947 and
that devastatngly hard year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:32 PM
A heartfelt write! What we have in our memory we often can’t share the heart of it. Hugs ~ Kim
Ireland Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Thanks Kim. I think sometimes visiting memories can be emotionally draining as well
Bauer Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:02 PM
some memories are just etched into our minds, terry, and this one is a very powerful one. you've described the scene in such vivid detail i could almost feel the cold...
Ireland Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 2:00 AM
Thanks ilene. Close my eyes and I can feel that cild still today. For the UK it was a very harsh winter
Oldham Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Excellent, and heartbreaking, recounting of that year and memory, Terry. I am enjoying your poems; your memories of the Old World. I am one of the few who wants to hear. Keep them coming, mate! - john
Ireland Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Thanks John. The trouble is I seem to be the last of my generation from the village, so titus is a becoming a lost history. Sad when we lose our past
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