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How I loved my pretty rose so fragrant in the sun, In those butterscotch hours when time was young, And the obsidian nights were made for dreaming, Long before the sunset, when birds were screaming! Withered upon grass it laid, gone in one moment, And memory lingers like a lovely shadow of scent, My pretty rose so mulberry hued before the fall, Living but a season, could it have lived at all? Indeed it must have, for it has ever followed me, And colored my marmalade days in memory of beauty!

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Date: 2/20/2021 10:57:00 PM
Such is earthy life, but memories stay forever. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/21/2021 7:47:00 AM
You have my warmest thanks, Victor. :)
Date: 2/20/2021 6:44:00 PM
Love the way you've revived the rose to give it 'eternal life,' so to speak. Wonderful imagery phraseology as well. Delightful, Evelyn! Happiness, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 7:29:00 PM
Memory is a wonderful thing. You have my deepest thanks for your appreciation. Lingering Smiles, Evelyn
Date: 2/20/2021 6:24:00 PM
Such lovely images surrounding your beloved rose. Nice colors! Well-written!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 7:30:00 PM
Your appreciation is so gratifying. Thank you.

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