Withdrawal In a Dream

How different this place
this sanctuary feels, here
inside one’s head. Where
insidious illusions fondle
a subvert mind, and obscenities
resonate within the confusion,
when fidgety creatures, assume
guardianship of my preternatural
situation, scurry around my space,
creating lattice of fabrication
across the quaking ceiling.
My imagination becoming
their fodder, my perception
their power, my tenacity
their strength, before spinneret
interweaves segregation of my
day and night.
Bollocks! To the physician of eastern
promise, he that controls this
nightmare, drip feeding diurnal
poison to this empathy
lost within an advocated paradox!
“Yet surely I have no need of
hatred, now I am confined within a
fragment of one’s dream.”
A genus of warmth; yet a confused
state of perplexity that knows
no boundaries, where bloodstain
walls survey me, incessant shadows
dance in gutless sunlight, and
radical rays anoint me with
“Hope and religion.”
I call out to Rock’n’roll!
Sammy Turner gives me
an impetuous rendering of
“Lavender Blue.”
Then I see an old man struggling
with his own situation. Touched
I call out.
“Are you ‘Jesus Christ?”
He scans my inquiring mind.
He senses I’m an imposter,
he raises one finger
affords me two words!
Both of one demystified syllable!

© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Timperley Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:46 AM
'tis a wondrous place within ones mind where the sprites can flit unfettered. sometimes they can chill but never kill, that is without their remit. Love the ending and the very ending too. Blessings my poetic friend.
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Harry, I love the love story but so heartbreaking a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend Eve
Callus Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Excellent, Harry! Ok, I admit I've had to read it a few times; not easy eliciting all that you had in mind. ~ Congratulations on a worthy win! // paul
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August 4, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write harry! Thnx for ur visits to my page!
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August 2, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Harry, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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September 4, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Interesting write Harry, enjoyed love Elizabeth
K. Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Wow harry, this poem is just loaded! It is the kind of write that you want to read again and again since you want to try to fully get it, but it is also very satisfying to not fully figure it out (eep am I too weird in thinking that?)-- I like how this makes me think! I just know I will be coming back here--- Also, I'm dropping by to say hi, I hope all is well with you, harry :)! Enjoy your weekend!
Carrillo Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 4:27 PM
This poem is good. It seems like you are picking our brain. I'm glad that it is only a dream. I do believe that Jesus is always with us. We are never alone. Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 11:48 AM
soupmail.
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August 31, 2012 at 11:33 AM
A very difficult one for me, harry. but I am sure you are saying something genius here about humanity and the state of the world today. I really like what you said in the end. I think many of us are imposters in our own ways.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 11:22 AM
I have read and re-read this, it is getting through to me line by line and I like it more and more but fear it in a way xx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Wow not sure if you are on a downer or upper, lots going on here harry but the weaver is still there it reads through, there is something locked in here that need letting out but it is s super write even though I don't understand it all xx
Bauer Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:12 AM
wow! this is a very interesting poem. i'm not sure i understand all of it, but i love the language you've used - great choices! (i'm pretty sure i get the ending, though - nice!)
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