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With You I Am Myself

" sounds of swift ivory doves cry out, they know how our love does outshine with flickering light- a million fairytales tremble at us, fleeting into the ebon night; never cursed or full of deep blight; for our love loses not insight, nor does it fail to do what is right, I embrace you…you hold me tight saturated in loneliness were you- yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease, black ravens plague this existence, discouraging me with such persistence, I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease; descending onto my grateful knees- I sense your essence in the breeze the wind blows, and gusts prevail, weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains- emerging from the dust I was found intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains; your genuine adoration still sustains, as the tempest rages in warm rains for I am but a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all of eternity- giving you of myself from the depths of my sincerity, and I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved…eternally. and... sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection, a whisper of tenderness giving me direction, my alleviation found in perfection- bound by love and affection" September 7, 2019 Lu's Poem Switcha-roo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 10/8/2019 7:48:00 PM
Gina congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/7/2019 6:46:00 AM
Wow sweet Gina :) loved the lines you added with end rhyme, beautifully expressed poem. I am never surprised to see you on the winners list! Be blessed...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/7/2019 9:09:00 AM
You're a wonder!!! Just love you and am SO honored to have placed. Bless you always
Date: 9/8/2019 7:02:00 PM
Gorgeous entry Regina. Good luck in the contest. Especially liked this part: "your genuine adoration still sustains, as the tempest rages in warm rains"
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:35:00 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest dear friend - your imagery soars up into the heavens in this beautiful write. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/8/2019 4:16:00 AM
Thank you for your comments and kindness. I loved the poem as it was, but switched it around and added some to enter the contest... it is mostly someone else's work though :)
Date: 9/7/2019 11:26:00 PM
Lots of good imagery delivering substantial emotion, the layers of which most of us relate to. All the best ... CayCay
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/8/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. Blessings

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