With You I Am Myself

" sounds of swift ivory doves cry out,
   they know how our love does outshine with flickering light-
a million fairytales tremble at us,
  fleeting into the ebon night;
 never cursed or full of deep blight;
for our love loses not insight,
nor does it fail to do what is right,
I embrace you…you hold me tight

saturated in loneliness were you-
  yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease,
black ravens plague this existence,
discouraging me with such persistence,
  I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease;
descending onto my grateful knees-
I sense your essence in the breeze

the wind blows, and gusts prevail,
  weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains-
emerging from the dust I was found
   intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains;
your genuine adoration still sustains,
as the tempest rages in warm rains



for I am but a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all of eternity-
giving you of myself from the depths of my sincerity,
and I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved…eternally.

   and...

sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection,
a whisper of tenderness giving me direction,
my alleviation found in perfection-
bound by love and affection"


September 7, 2019
Lu's Poem Switcha-roo Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lu Loo
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La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Gina congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:46 AM
Wow sweet Gina :) loved the lines you added with end rhyme, beautifully expressed poem. I am never surprised to see you on the winners list! Be blessed...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Mcintosh Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 9:09 AM
You're a wonder!!! Just love you and am SO honored to have placed. Bless you always
Krutsinger Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Gorgeous entry Regina. Good luck in the contest. Especially liked this part: "your genuine adoration still sustains, as the tempest rages in warm rains"
Proxenos Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:35 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest dear friend - your imagery soars up into the heavens in this beautiful write. Hugs, Jennifer.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 4:16 AM
Thank you for your comments and kindness. I loved the poem as it was, but switched it around and added some to enter the contest... it is mostly someone else's work though :)
Godwin Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:26 PM
Lots of good imagery delivering substantial emotion, the layers of which most of us relate to. All the best ... CayCay
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 4:15 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. Blessings
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