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With You With you I’m empty inside, My dreams, my hopes, go out with the tide, I cannot change, not for you, That wouldn’t be me, that wouldn’t be true. With you I can’t live my life, Bitterness increases my endless strife, I can’t be what you want me to be, For in the mirror, it’s me, I see. With you I wake up to cloudy days, Nowhere to turn, I spin in a haze, I can’t go on living this lie, Trying to please, while wanting to fly. With you I can do no right, It seems all we do is fight, day and night, What’s the point in living this way, If “I’m a failure” is all you can say? With you I cannot speak, Without the fear of a damning critique, Voiceless, I just keep things inside, They’ll probably stay there til the day I die. With you I can never be heard, My stories, you’ll never be stirred, I listen to myself, to the echoes I make, They stay with me until I awake. With you I will never be me, A fact you clearly can’t see, It’s time to end this meaningless fight, It’s time for me to take to flight. So goodbye I say, I wish you well, What the future holds, I cannot tell, Without you I can finally be me, A fact I now can clearly see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/22/2016 11:32:00 PM
Steven Hess, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/10/2013 5:34:00 AM
Excellent poem, boy to live like that to frighten you'd be stepping on eggs, that is no way to live, one should never have to change just to please someone so selfish, what an ego, we don't belong to anyone love is a choice not conditional, blessings sueellen ,
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Sue-Ellen Newman
Date: 8/10/2013 5:36:00 AM
Sorry, I forgot to say hi and welcome to poetry soup, I am sure you will enjoy it here, sueellen

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