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With Unknown Aplomb

Me,
I
am thee,
she naked
Amidst bodies, I
interject myself upon he
With unknown aplomb, reaching sexual crescendo
He now lies spent, taken to the limits orgasmically, by she, me, naked I




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Syllables counted from 'The Free Dictionary' differing from the 'Soups'

Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/2/2015 7:01:00 PM James, Thank you for the sweet sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/20/2015 10:52:00 PM JAMES, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/22/2015 7:17:00 AM Thank you Linda, always appreciate a visit from you, James :)

Kim Merryman Date: 3/17/2015 5:06:00 PM Hot Stuff! Congrats on your 1st place win, James! Love, Kim Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/18/2015 5:33:00 PM Thank you kindly Kim, hugs//James :)

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/17/2015 8:46:00 AM An enjoyable thought! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/18/2015 5:28:00 PM Many thanks Debbie, nice to see my thoughts appreciated ;-) James :) :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2015 2:19:00 PM Congrats on your win..Passionate work..Sara Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 5:08:00 PM Many thanks Sara, much appreciated, James :)

Casarah Nance Date: 3/16/2015 8:31:00 AM I love how you weave sexuality in your writes, it is beautiful and raw. :) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 5:05:00 PM Hiya Casarah, thanks kindly for your koolio comment, smiles, James :)

Skat A Date: 3/15/2015 11:51:00 PM JAMES, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 5:01:00 PM Many thanks SKAT, my first attempt, smiling :)

Skat A Date: 3/15/2015 3:36:00 PM you have a wonderful imagination...SKAT Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 4:47:00 PM Thank you for such a lovely compliment SKAT :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 3/15/2015 7:21:00 AM Sensual...and you made it to the top once again! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 7:25:00 AM Hiya Dane Ann, blessed Sunday to you. This is my first attempt at this form, and for it to be so recognised leaves me with Big Smiles. Nice to see you here, hugs//James :) :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/15/2015 7:08:00 AM Interesting method of expression, unusual, but the message is delivered all the same. Congratulations, James, on your top win! You are in good company, may I say!! // paul Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 7:15:00 AM Thank you kindly Paul, it's pure fiction Sir, just an imagination being allowed to wander. Yes indeed, I am in great company of which I'm humbled. Have a blessed Sunday, James..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/15/2015 12:41:00 AM Words so beautifully set,, creative write James! Congrats on top place win! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 11:38:00 AM Many thanks Upma, my first attempt at this form, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 10:45:00 PM aha so Dino James your spill :D :P did great hahaha... I echo the comment I said earlier but may I add that am always lured by how you do your phrases and sentences... :) the classy way you did it like on the lines starting with amidst 'til the second to the last.. :)! I'm glad to share this same spot with you.. :) BIG CONGRATULATIONS!!!HEY HEY smay i say spill your ink again soon!;)//olive eloisa Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 7:55:00 AM Weeee why not let's try another collab perhaps? :) James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 7:36:00 AM Hiya Oliz, you may spill and share my ink as much as you so desire, for it leads to smiles by both. So looking forward to sharing our future poetry, for we bounce off each other with aplomb ;-) mega hugs//James xx

Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2015 8:21:00 PM dropping back with my congrats James:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 11:22:00 AM Hiya Jan, many thanks as always, hugs//James xx

Rob Carmack Date: 3/14/2015 8:12:00 PM James, congrats on the win. Love the word orders. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 10:04:00 AM Hi Rob, thank you kindly for honoring my poem so highly, it's very much appreciated. Happy Sunday to you, James :)

Kim Shaw Date: 3/14/2015 7:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win, James!! Hugs, Kimberly Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 10:00:00 AM Hiya Kimberly, thank you kindly for your kind words, hugs//James :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/14/2015 12:28:00 PM Dear James, I'm not familiar with the form, but you always have a talent for writing very sensual poems. I can almost feel the "crescendo." So good to see your work again, my friend. I hope life is good to you now. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 1:09:00 PM Hi Carolyn, it's not a form I'd tried before but I thought I'd give it a try. Thank you kindly for your always kind words. Presently, simply living quiet, in the meantime work keeps me busy which is good, hugs, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/13/2015 6:47:00 AM Dino James, i was actually trying to figure all the pronouns James.. :D! but What I can say is the picture from your words is oozing hot and sultry!!!.. :) warm hugs.. //olive eloisa Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 1:17:00 PM Oh I'm sure to spill soon Oliz ;-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 8:23:00 AM oh yes thoughts of the writer. :P spill it more.. :P! James Fraser Date: 3/13/2015 9:58:00 AM My first attempt at this form. Glad you liked it Oliz, mmm, thoughts of the writer ;-) hugs aplenty, James xxxx

Eve Roper Date: 3/12/2015 10:31:00 PM Very dramatic romantic write, James. a 7 and good luck in the contest Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/13/2015 2:27:00 PM Thank you kindly Eve, happy weekend to you, hugs//James :)

Cupids Arrow Date: 3/12/2015 4:20:00 PM soft and smooth James...a perfect dance...C--->A Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/13/2015 2:23:00 PM Indeed Cupids, the dance of a loving trance. Such poetry always makes the mind think overtime. Happy weekend to you, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/12/2015 3:46:00 PM - you took us to the dizzy heights with this write James - wow what a passionate write my friend - good luck for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 3/13/2015 2:09:00 PM Evening Jan, this is my first attempt at this form. I really need to try new forms to enhance ones writing, hugs//James xx