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With the Dawning Light

I lean against the railing Drinking in the setting sun The breeze dances in my hair The day will soon be done I feel your arms around me Your body pressed against mine I lean back on your shoulder Drink in your scent like wine Your lips linger on my neck I let out a gentle sigh “Come inside, my sweet darling Let the moon rise in your eyes. I know I’m often busy Love making seems so rushed Tonight I’ll take things slow In a room tranquil and hushed.” You turn me round to face you You claim me with a kiss “Oh, come with me, my darling Let me fill this night with bliss You give me all that I want You never withhold my due Tonight, lie back, my darling Let ME make love to you.” You carry me to our bed And gently lay me down I close my eyes and sigh As your hands undress me now “Just let me love and hold you Let me ravish till morning light In liquid warmth of sweetness Is where I will pass this night.” I feel your hands caress me I feel your lips of fire I faintly hear your murmurs As I’m taken by desire Tenderly, gently, slowly You tease my receptive mind Knowing full well, it is there My fantasies you will find I listen and I follow I surrender as I'm lead Tonight you want to give Tonight I will be fed Passion has shut my eyes Every touch...magnified Your lips kiss away my tears When in release I have cried I finally resurface Your hand toys with my damp hair Your lips give a longing kiss Of your need I’m now aware I croon softly in your ear “Let desire now take flight Come in to me, my darling Come now with the dawning light.” Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/24/2013 9:44:00 PM
luvd it vry mch tc ~V~
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Date: 9/23/2013 8:19:00 AM
A captivating piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
:) Thanks Ndaba. Glad you liked it!
Date: 9/23/2013 8:06:00 AM
You, the sunrise. Him, the sunset. Together, making it rain. Gorgeous!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
Drake....this post is sheer....sheer....magic! LOVE IT!!! Thanks for the visit. I've missed you!
Date: 9/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
Yes, very passionate thoughts nicely expressed, Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:24:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Dr Ram. A pleasure to have your visit.
Date: 9/22/2013 4:11:00 PM
Cranking up the passion here my little Desert Orchid, a very beautiful write indeed, where do you get your inspiration lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:26:00 AM
My dear Mr Seal....So glad that you could manage to pass by and visit my work...I have missed your posts on Poetry Soup.....My inspiration? I though you knew better than to ask that, Mr Seal....One never will kiss and tell....Do take care!
Date: 9/22/2013 3:25:00 PM
sizzling with every drip of your lines,eileen... the heat is one; gorgeous!..:) huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:26:00 AM
:) Awwwwwwwwww...........thanks, Nette. Very very sweet of you to post that lovely comment. Hugs
Date: 9/22/2013 12:32:00 PM
DRINKING FROM THE SUN HOT AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:27:00 AM
Even your posts are romantic! ;) Thanks for the visit, Liam....
Date: 9/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
Hi Eileen, A provocative and sensual write... Regards, Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:28:00 AM
Thank you...two great adjectives... :) I appreciate your post :)
Date: 9/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
Love in boom, an young period. Beautifully penned. Loved always, bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:30:00 AM
:) Thanks BL....Love must bloom, indeed! Hugs
Date: 9/22/2013 8:49:00 AM
Hello Queen of the Passionate Pen !!!! Another great write!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:30:00 AM
A title I bear with joy! :) Life cannot be lived without passion, can it? Thanks for the visit, Arthur! :)
Date: 9/22/2013 7:50:00 AM
I agree with Jack! You are the Queen of the passionate pen. You never dissapoint.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:19:00 AM
YOU are my forever contest judge, Richard...Your opinion is what I go by.... :) If you say I'm the Queen of the Passionate Men...what more could I ask for from any contest judge? Thanks!!!
Date: 9/22/2013 7:16:00 AM
So so descriptive... this passionate poem about love! Absolutely no one writes about passion as you do, my dear Eileen! Love and warm thoughts, Kenny xoxoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:18:00 AM
Awwwwwwww.....how absolutely lovely and sweet of you, Kenny...HUGS HUGS HUGS. I take pride in this post. Yes...I'm a walking passion power house! HA HA HA HA! Love ya! Hugs

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