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With Jaundiced Eye

With jaundiced eye I look at the politician’s vow To make our world a better place in four years, Cure all our ills, and provide calm for our fears, And I say to myself, skeptically, exactly “How?” With jaundiced eye I look at those who claim To be patriots, but with angry words and deeds Go about spreading discord and planting seeds, Saying despicable things, obviously seeking fame. With jaundiced eye I view the biased news media And wonder the truth of any situation they report “Doesn’t anybody report just the facts, anymore?” Allow me my own analyzing without your insignia. With jaundiced eye I look at magnificent towers Built for “the glory of God,” on the backs of poor Folks who fear the fiery pits of hell, for sure, If they fail to pay homage to the “godly” powers. Written June 15, 2021 For “Jaundiced Eye” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Keith Dovoric

Date: 6/18/2021 7:16:00 AM

A piece with a message -- who knew that was a any longer a possibility? From the form (love the A-B-B-A) to the content (lucid, sober sentiments throughout), this is surely well-crafted and serious work, all the more so against the backdrop of these vapid times.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/18/2021 7:56:00 AM

Just telling it like I see it, Keith. Glad you read it and commented. I appreciated it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/17/2021 2:53:00 AM

This is heading right up the hill to the winner's circle, Hank.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/17/2021 8:48:00 AM

Ah, we'll see. I was just trying to write about these things as I see them.

John Lawless

Date: 6/15/2021 4:07:00 PM

HEY, careful, you could put your eye out with that pen.....Great job

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/15/2021 4:14:00 PM

Thanks, John. I try to be careful because I know sometimes I go too far out. A skeptic at heart, I think.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/15/2021 2:20:00 PM

Yes, it is sad that reality and science are ignored and the media (both right and left) favor ratings over facts, a very insightful piece~

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/15/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle, for your kind and thoughtful comment on my poem. I really appreciate it.