With Fantastic Shields Made of Doubt Proof Steel

With Fantastic Shields Made Of Doubt Proof Steel
             (The Turning Point)

In this my heart, I dare steel my resolve,
never again yield to cowardly fear,
change my life and in truth's wisdom evolve
well lighted path that breeds courage so clear.

In my spirit, a new creature shall dwell,
no more night shadows will dare ever haunt,
no more black nights spent fighting gates of hell
no more bloody demons that cut and taunt.

In hope, life begins its journey anew,
with fantastic shields made of doubt proof steel,
resting upon faithful words - bold and true
no longer in my darkness, life is real.

In true faith, this dark world is seen clearly.
In true light, hope is embraced, held dearly.

R.J. Lindley
June 14th, 1979

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Note- Written in my private journal , long ago.
I fell many times after this (demons that sought my destruction not conquered yet)
but eventually faith brought its just rewards--my current life and family..
Granted- I've still a long way to go--(conquering my temper)..
as my very long family bloodline of warriors /fighters are not easily defeated my friends..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/19/2016 10:42:00 AM
Admitting our weaknesses is always the first step in the right direction. Continue to turn your back on Satan and your hope will remain strong. But beware...when we feel we are strong, we are weak, and when we are weak we are made strong because it's then that we ask for His help. Nicely written sonnet, Robert.
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:27:00 AM
A great write. Ending is very nice.I enjoyed..........with love.
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