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With Bated Breath

Waiting for your return Is unmitigated Torture. Don’t you know How bleak, how Bereft my days Are, how empty The endless, lonely Evenings? I beg you, Delay no longer. Be merciful, my meandering Muse. Return with inspiration and imagery that Elude me. Bring the meter And rhyme I so miss. Then I can smile, write, and be Happy once again. Date: August 26, 2019 Contest: Pick a Title, Acrostic --Chosen Title: With Bated Breath Sponsor: Edward Ibeh January 24, 2021 entered in the All Yours (Jan 24) Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/27/2019 10:24:00 AM
Oh, this is my prayer! But, it seems dear lady that yours has been answered! Enjoyed this piece!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/27/2019 1:26:00 PM
THANKS so much, P S.! Janice
Date: 8/27/2019 7:35:00 AM
Very cleverly done..enjoyed the turn in the poem..all the best, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/27/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 8/26/2019 9:12:00 PM
Very nice, Janice! Thought at first that you were writing of a lover, … and then I realized that you were! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice

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