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Walking up the winding path inside the cemetery where my family is buried; the path leads me through the oldest parts, and I recall haunted stories of childhood. Breathless, I walk faster and whisper a prayer; another turn, then another, oh am I lost! Turning around in circles- I see through trees the sun; even the hushed angels sigh for me as quickly I walk down a path familiar- finding my family tomb. Butterflies dance and twirl, and reaching branches of willows drape the stone; everything is still and quiet, even though birds sing, oh a red rose in my hand is now wilted dead; the words engraved I now read with bated breath, I remember happy blissful memories and sadly, too soon deaths. ___________________________ August 21, 2019 Poetry/Acrostic/With Bated Breath Copyright Protected, ID 19-1174-813-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pick A Title, Vol. 8 - Acrostic sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Title Chosen #5, With Bated Breath Second Place

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Date: 9/9/2019 5:35:00 AM
A beautiful yet poignant entry Constance. Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:17:00 PM
Connie,thank you for the compliment and congratulations.
Date: 9/7/2019 9:59:00 PM
This is such a gem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for the gift. God bless you and congratulations.
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Date: 9/9/2019 2:18:00 PM
Regina, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations.
Date: 9/7/2019 2:58:00 PM
- A place to find silence and peace, beautifully written D.H. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2019 2:19:00 PM
Anne-lise, thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations.
Date: 9/7/2019 12:02:00 PM
Just a fabulous, well-written poem, Constance:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:20:00 PM
Edward, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my great placement.
Date: 8/26/2019 6:06:00 PM
Such a beautiful, descriptive, poem full of love, Dear Heart. The photo you posted is perfect. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:22:00 PM
Warren, thank you for the beautiful and nice comment.
Date: 8/25/2019 10:53:00 AM
This so so thoughtfully and wonderfully written. The stillness of cemeteries I'd forever, a memorable thing. Best wishes Panagiota
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:23:00 PM
Panagiota, thank you for visiting and for the compliment.
Date: 8/21/2019 9:39:00 PM
Nice Poem, Reminds me of my childhood walks to see my departed relatives.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2019 2:24:00 PM
Timothy,thank you for visiting.

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