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belonging- a sense of achieving, like how the sand joins the sea with you, with me . . even the day craves the sun the moon kisses the sky deeply, when evening is done a heart trembles, never wishing for anything new if it must be, with and without you ------------- - to always be connected through love - sweet emotions from the heart * this poem is about feeling love deeply- when you are with someone, and missing them greatly, when you are without them *

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Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2022 6:12:00 AM

Whether near or far love is never out of reach, Lovely write Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/20/2022 7:13:00 PM

You are right, Joseph. Love is always a whisper away. Thank you for your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/21/2018 11:55:00 AM

Succinct and beautiful Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you SYLVIA. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/20/2018 8:29:00 AM

aww.. now that is love, the connection that is unparalleled. This is a great write. :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Casarah. :) I appreciate your lovely comment. ~ Brandy

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/19/2018 3:18:00 PM

Throughout the good and the bad times. you sure nail love with your wonderful sentiment,,

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 8:11:00 PM

Thank you Harry. Many moments touch love. Those that hold the heart deeply, are the ones that mean so much. And- those missing moments, are the ones you need so close. You ache for. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 7/19/2018 12:45:00 PM

If the love isn't true it's better to be without. So many live under the same roof, but they're no longer under the same spell (love spell). A tender, wise wright, but also a meditative Muse.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:46:00 PM

Yes, I agree. If you love someone and they do not love you in return, it is better to be without them. In this case, with my poem. It is about being in love, and feeling it soooo deeply, when you are with that special someone. Missing them so much, when they are away from you. Oh- that sweet ache of love. How it lingers. Thank you for your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Dm Babbit

Date: 7/19/2018 12:21:00 PM

How wonderfully written. I miss love, waiting for its return.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thank you DM. Maybe love will find you again soon. I hope so. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/19/2018 10:56:00 AM

Well done...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Tobey. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 9:41:00 AM

Many will be able to relate...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I am sure many can relate to these words. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2018 8:50:00 AM

Sometimes without is the best way to go. A thought provoking piece.:0)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Richard. Your thoughts hold so much truth. As far as someone not feeling the same way as you do. It is better to be without them. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/19/2018 12:03:00 AM

Lovely imagery. "a heart trembles, never wishing for anything new," tells the reader that this love is for always.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:37:00 PM

Thank you Caren. Yes, a heart trembling means that it feels love so deeply. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2018 10:56:00 PM

The moon kisses the sky when evening is due...so so romantic...love it

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:35:00 PM

Thank you Tim. Romance lingers around these thoughts, as does so many other emotions as well. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/18/2018 10:08:00 PM

As the day craves the sun and the moon kisses the sky, I ponder your words as this night drifts by. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:33:00 PM

Thank you John. This poem holds so many emotions indeed. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy