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With a White Painted Mark

A telephone pole With a white painted mark Next to a large rock With moss on it On top of a dirt patch Where grass is near And surrounds the scene A small bush or tree Wraps itself around the pole Still revealing the white painted mark Which marks this spot As our area Of pure romance Where it all started When love bonded us And wrapped around each other A spark of memory In our minds eye To hold always By the telephone pole With a white painted mark
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/8/2013 11:24:00 PM
Hello my friend, what a great piece you have penned here, enjoyed reading it. Rollo
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:06:00 PM
the special place, within the mind, sticks to us like turpentine, brer bunny should beware, things are sticky there, the past it does rewind:)
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Date: 1/8/2013 5:12:00 PM
Awwwee !! This is just special !! I need to write about my special green rock one day. Holds such wonderful meaning. Enjoyed your poem and the love it showed. Splendid writing !! Thanks for dropping by my page recently !! Much appreciate the feedback.
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:33:00 PM
Interesting work..Great memory of new love or maybe young love..Enjoyed reading..Entwined is the pole and the lovers...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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