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With a Lessening of Light

I pressed a barb under my tongue to remind me I pierced glass into my heart to awaken a story as blood dripped a memory formed in the pain and suffering an effigy wavered then I knew some stories should never be told and forever remain locked under my tongue speared into my heart and silent in eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 5:22:00 AM
very strong image here thank you my friend [duncan]
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:53:00 AM
A neat allegory depiction in your free verse Jayne. Thanks for your comments today, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:37:00 AM
You are right .You just made me tear up a poem:Just cause its the truth don't mean I got to tell it huh? somethings are better left unsaid. ding ding bells went off....hush truth!
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:57:00 PM
very deep and strong, the wound seems to be gone, but never forgotten. Enjoyed,...p.d.
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