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With a Flickering Lamp

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Life was not a bed of roses for many women              who, for time eternal,             left footprints and paved our path, so we can walk with our heads high.              often ponder, and imagine the unimaginable  power and strength,              behind every step, every action, of those brave women              who appear in my dreams!              often wonder about Gargi and Maitryee in ancient history,              who wrote vedic hymns along with other scholars,              of Khona, who sacrificed her talents in astronomy to barbaric cruelty,              dream of being a Jane Austen, a Charlotte Brontie,               who used their pen in a male-dominated society,               to portray a  world where female voices were suppressed.               a face familiar to me, appears in my dream,               a courageous  woman from a humble household,               who...tirelessly engaged in numerous daily chores...all day,               but at midnight...children  sleeping,               with a flickering oil-lamp at her bedside....               without a soul being aware of  her insatiable pursuit of knowledge,               ardently pored over classics and novels and poems,               a saint deeply immersed in profound meditation.               society did not approve her goal,               but she challenged the superstitious beliefs -               women become widows if they indulge in literary activities.               That picture of a lonely woman poring over books at midnight             with an oil-lamp...as her only support, is all I need for dreaming of a world where women find freedom from age-old shackles.   Reference: Gargi, Maitreyi: indian women philosophers who lived during the later vedic period (around 9th to 7th century BCE) in ancient india, as knowledgeable in vedas and upanishads as men of the times, and very well contested the men philosophers in debates. Khona: brilliant poet and astrologer, who composed between 9th and 12th century in ancient India (according to myths, was forced to give up her passion, so her father-in-law and husband retained their fame). March 7, 2021 FIRST PLACE Inspired by " Life's Struggles" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/17/2021 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on your wonderful poem. love phyl
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/17/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Phyllis. Really appreciate your comment. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/10/2021 9:00:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Free Verse, we take it for granted in my country that women can do whatever they want we forget that in places some women still cannot, well done _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/11/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. This is actually a homage to my grandmother, who never had a chance to go to school, but learned reading and writing in her home-language and English by her own efforts. Things have changed everywhere .. but it took a long time for women to find their equal rights...even the right to learn ~ Mala
Date: 3/10/2021 2:58:00 AM
Back here to congratulate you on your win with this wonderful entry dear Mala. It was truly inspiring to read this... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/10/2021 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Anitha. Your comments mean a lot to me. Really appreciate your encouraging comments.
Date: 3/10/2021 12:55:00 AM
- Life doesn’t always work out the way we want - There’s going to be darkness and pain, but there’s always going to be happiness, too :) - Congratulations on your win, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/10/2021 4:53:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, what you have said, is so true. Appreciate your kind words - thank you.
Date: 3/9/2021 8:34:00 PM
love this Mala, the strength the power, the history, its all here in your wonderful poetry...just has to be a favourite.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/10/2021 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Harry! So appreciate your inspiring comments.
Date: 3/9/2021 2:16:00 AM
I just loved your take in this contest Mala... In ancient times, long ago, those philosophers who contested equally with men with their knowledge in vedas...and your last few lines say it all..that a woman's struggle to achieve her passion in life should be equally respected...Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/9/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Ani. I am so glad you liked the poem. It is really a great theme. Your poem is outstanding. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/8/2021 2:42:00 PM
Truly a masterpiece!! One of your best poems. My favourite stanza, " a face familiar to me, appears in my dream, a courageous woman from a humble household, who...tirelessly completed numerous daily chores...all day, but at midnight...children sleeping, with a flickering oil-lamp at her bedside...." Thought -provoking and inspiring. More power on your pen dear Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/8/2021 3:07:00 PM
Dear JCB, I truly enjoyed writing this poem, and I am glad - you did too! I feel it as our responsibility to remember the great women and their sufferings. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/8/2021 5:25:00 AM
Dear Mala, its time for the age old shackles to come off our ankles and wrists. We need to breathe beautiful and free to live how God meant us to live. Thank you for sharing your hear felt verse today.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/8/2021 5:31:00 AM
So true, Rose. It is time - that's what I feel. Thank you for visiting my poem. Your comments are so touching and thoughtful ~ Mala

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