Witchin

poor ol witch of the knocky knees, says rocky road, i had one breeze, down draught nearly broke me wheese, but here i am a flying... to the poor old broom im crying, no more splinters please. re: Russell Sivey "Curse of the Night' Don Johnson

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/19/2012 4:02:00 AM

You made me smile, loved it

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/18/2012 8:48:00 PM

You made me laugh, Don! Great write. Love, Kim

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/18/2012 6:20:00 PM

nailed it Don... splinters mystery and all. Great job of it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2012 4:05:00 PM

Aweee..I just got done reading Russell's poem... you are an excellent poet Don, and i love what you do. I wish i was easily inspired.. My head is hard... xox~pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2012 3:46:00 PM

good one Don, written in true oz style, i like the 'down draught' line brilliant...

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/18/2012 3:25:00 PM

Ha ha ha, this is so funny my friend! I truly enjoy your cleverly written poems! This one did not disappoint I must say! The line, "no more splinters please." really got me, it made me laugh so hard, you have no idea how that tickled me! This is a special write Don, I really love it, Great Work!!