witch bakery

there once was an old witch whose pies

were unique in flavor and size

she delighted her covens

when she opened her ovens

with dozens of old crusty guys.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hoffman Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Delilightful piece, Richard! This made me smile.
Breese Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 12:57 PM
I am very happy it made you smile.
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:21 AM
Creative and descriptive work. I got a chuckle. Sara
Breese Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Great Sara. This is popular this time of year.
Greener Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Now that is hilarious
Breese Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Thanks Dexter. I really appreciate that.
Wolf Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Ha, ha! Thanks for the laughs, Richard! Smiles for Miles, Gershon
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:59 PM
So glad you enjoyed it.
Bayles Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 5:51 PM
I love the humor the the rhyme in this limeric.
Breese Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 4:13 AM
Thanks Mike!
Barden Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Richard - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Thank you.
Sikorski Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 4:57 AM
Sorry ! A great title. I’m afraid I am a bit under the weather today !
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Hope you got better. :) Thanks for the comment.
Sikorski Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 4:56 AM
I enjoy aa great title to a poem, This one did not disappoint ! Immensely enjoyable !
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Thanks Kimberly.
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May 17, 2020 at 4:59 AM
Hamilton Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 6:07 PM
superb Richard congrats on 3rd place hugs
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Thanks very much Shadow. Nice name by the way.
Gauthier Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Fun surprise indeed. Congrats.
Breese Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Thanks Line. Very nice name.
Adams Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Great Limerick, Richard. LOL
Breese Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 12:31 PM
This is hot in the Fall. :)
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:53 AM
LOL - Great Limerick.
Breese Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Thanks.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:14 PM
really very beautifully drawn piece
Breese Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Actually it just evolved from a rhyming dictionary, nothing more, and a little luck.
A   Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:25 PM
I like October
Breese Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:38 PM
Me too.
A   Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Hi Richard, I enjoyed this limerick.. LOL, to the old crusty guys... ewwww.. Linda
Breese Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:23 PM
October fun. Thanks.
O'Leary Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Clever...funny... ;-)
Breese Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Thanks.
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Very funny Richard! xxxx D.
Breese Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Thanks Dorian. I'm glad you enjoy limericks.
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