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Witch At Pike's Peak

Once upon a Pike’s Peak dreary, This witch said her name was Carrie, Fog so thick couldn’t see nary, Though her screech was a bit scary! Suddenly the thick fog lifted, What I saw was nary gifted, She stared as on broom she shifted, Astrid the broom her dress drifted. I saw her multi colored socks, Her face was marked with multi pocks, Ugly wench, as small pile of rocks, She said, “Aren’t I a beauty’s fox?” I said, “You are beauty’s least! On your face, maggots have feasts! You resemble something deceased! Beauty’s returned as the beast.” “Your beauty has been impeached, Your ugly face has been leeched, Dried up prune not lovely peach, Leave me now of thee I beseech.” Now visit to Pike’s Peak is bleary, Because of Carrie I’m leery, Resemblance to exes is eerie, Place doesn’t fit my game theory!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/5/2010 8:44:00 PM
this indeed was delightfully funny and rhymilistic ,,if there is such a word,,oh well a very well rounded rhyme that you have penned and shook us all into laughter,,,all the best in all your writing,,and Thank You for always visiting and leaving your words behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:10:00 PM
Oh, this is outrageously funny, John!! Many great lines, but my favorite is "Beauty's returned as the beast." Very witty! This goes to my favorites. A terrific read as Halloween approaches. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:50:00 PM
Spooky...and fun! Well written, entertaining. Fun to read. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Dane Ann
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:08:00 PM
Great example poem my friend.. read before .. wonderful ..thankxxx Moses ..luv..
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Date: 10/27/2010 4:23:00 AM
Interesting work in this one..I didn't know that you had it in you to write one like this..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I won in a contest..I will have to look it up..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:30:00 AM
just love these witchy poems, 4th verse is a classic. thanks for my placement in your contest. Harry
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:26:00 PM
Hope I don't run into this one. Thank you John for my no. 2 shared spot. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:10:00 PM
LOL have to stay away from those "witches" ;) Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:14:00 PM
strangely scary!
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:52:00 PM
Wonderful Moses .. intriguing and suspenseful Halloween goodie luv... will avoid Pike's Peak for sure.. amazing tale.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:01:00 PM
Your exes errie...now thats funny..good one..BG
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Date: 10/24/2010 3:42:00 PM
What a humorous HALLOWEEN WRITE with equally apt images to create a pen picture of the witch, enjoyed it, John
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