Witch

Wicked cold wimp weaving Wrinkled woes on Samhain Warlock of witchery Waving threefold fiction Whilst hanging on chaos Wretched and worthless from Worn out dry iced love spells

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/6/2023 2:32:00 PM

Hi Inky, back with congratulations and a hats off to you! Love the line "hanging on chaos!" I knew there would be memorable images that flow so easily from your creativity! Blessings, my friend!

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 9/27/2023 10:16:00 AM

This so wonderfully actually salutes the witch...She just keeps going with the “spells”, even though it wears her out. Normal humans cannot but turn to her in their confusion of what love is. U see so clearly, then describe what you c so succinctly. I love this one. ThkU for your comment on my “businessman” write. You encourage me. Trust you are good ????

Ink Empress
Date: 9/28/2023 3:16:00 AM

Im good beautiful soul thank u so much for appreciating my words. I hope to read more of your work too. You are amazing. Stay blessed and keep shining

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 8:32:00 AM

Congrats on your win Empress, Nicely penned

Ink Empress
Date: 9/28/2023 3:17:00 AM

Thank u for the experience and inspiration.

Valsa George

Date: 9/25/2023 9:39:00 PM

You have created a perfect picture of a witch blending together all the right words that are associated with the age old notions of a witch. Your poem is stronger than the magic potion comprising ingredients like toenails, coffin nails, lizard entrails et al prepared by a witch. :) This time the sponsor will be put to test, I am sure. All the Best

Ink Empress
Date: 9/26/2023 3:04:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much your comment left me smiling you are such a beautiful soul so kind and generous thank you so much always for being so supportive you are amazing

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/25/2023 2:11:00 PM

Dear Ink, These pleiades for the witch contest are really great. It's going to be a close one. Best of luck dear poetess. What exactly does one get if they win this? Very creative write.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/26/2023 3:03:00 AM

So kind of you to say its great. Thank you so much, i get nothing from writing or winning, but just find inspiration through prompts, which gets me to ink. Pleiades are tricky and i dnt think ill win but its ok. I loved doing this. Hope u are doing well. Always appreciate your visits

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/25/2023 12:08:00 PM

Inky, your poetic mastery rises to the surface even in a seven line Pleiades! Your use of words is always off the chart of creativity in a unique blend vivid imagery and lyrical cadence. Love your creative alliteration, "wimp weaving," "wrinkled woes" and the sense of worn out spells on dry ice! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 12:22:00 PM

Awwn sam you are so kind and sweet really thank you for always blessing my writes with your thoughtful and sincere feedback. Always grateful

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/25/2023 7:37:00 AM

A clever Pleiades about the nature of witches--an appropriate them for this time of year...with Halloween so near. I enjoyed your creation...have a great day, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:17:00 AM

Ah beautiful sara, it was for the pleiades contest, they provided few prompts and I chosen witch as iv never written really a factual one abt witches but was fun doing this altho i went for the fairytale definition . Thank u so much

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2023 4:17:00 AM

Very descriptive lines penned about what I guess a witch is. LOL..I have never actually looked up witch to see what they are supposed to be. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:18:00 AM

Dear Sara, its a bit of snow white version of witches lol but yes was fun doing it , for the contest

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/24/2023 10:11:00 PM

Woah, what a phenomenal Pleiades poem, lol those iced spells of wicked witchery! There are all kinds of people in every genre, but this seems like a representation of the manyyyy working against peace.. I'm loving the alliterations throughout and also the lines have been so well phrased in a very captivating way! "Waving threefold fiction" And the samhain reference.. Amazingly ingenious and very wise of you to have crafted this in such an interesting style..You're rocking as always, best of luck

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so very much truly for your kindness and for ur support always. I think so many hs also seem the dark side of witchery. And its real. Appreciate the wishes too

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/24/2023 8:17:00 PM

So well composed ! You have most vividly expressed about witches. Really it’s praiseworthy. I had littlr concept about this topic. Sure you will win. Have Great Days

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:20:00 AM

Awwn anisha i appreciate you reading and thinkin it is good enough means alot really . Thank u so much

Tom Woody

Date: 9/24/2023 7:28:00 PM

Samhain, the Druid festival on which Halloween is based, among other traditions. I shun anything associated with the occult. But if taken metaphorically, I get the threefold fiction (aka lying) stuff going down

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:21:00 AM

Yes so many i know have seen witchery in this century too and dark side of it, in everythn theres good n bad i guess. Thank u for reading truly

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/24/2023 6:40:00 PM

Your writing skills are exceptional, dear Ink, evident in your beautifully crafted poem about witches. It perfectly encapsulates the essence of a witch. You have mastered the theme, and it is clear that you possess extensive knowledge in this subject. Although I personally don't have much experience in this area, I recognize the magical power that words can possess.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:21:00 AM

This is so kind of you to say dear Sotto i appreciate ur support

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/24/2023 4:56:00 PM

I love the last line humor, never heard of Samhain, it's the same as Dia de los muertos, I just read. Many kinds of witches aren't there. I don't dabble, but I find that words can be sorcereus. If an entry, Empress, this one a winner to be sure. I hope mine doesn't upset anyone other than its aim..lol My best, to you the contest:)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:23:00 AM

Dear Anaya i have a witch friend she wasnt really offended , but said she loves it so i dont think it would really offend others as we are going for the universally known facts of witches. I appreciate u reading haha dry iced love spell i dunno how i thought of that line but thought would be appropriate cus i know some that do love spells like theres no tmrw sad! True. Loved ur poem too

Sara Jama

Date: 9/24/2023 4:20:00 PM

I think this is a very well written poem about witches. And I love the use of Samhain or a wiccans new year in this piece. A very throughout, well researched poem.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 10:47:00 PM

Yeay witch approves!!! Thank you grumpy goth!!! Im so happy grumpy commented on my poem and also thinks this is good enough. Welcome to soup

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2023 3:09:00 PM

hanging on chaos Wretched and worthless from Worn out dry iced love spells--that about sums it well to describe a witch. You aced the theme, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:24:00 AM

Ahhh thank u Vijay i appreciate you saying so always grateful for your support

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/24/2023 12:21:00 PM

Hi Impress, I've seen a lot of witch entries and I much enjoyed your take on the contest test theme. Stellar last line to tie it all up. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:24:00 AM

Yes so many good entries mine is nothing compared to theirs thank u so much

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 12:18:00 PM

Woah like you know them so well, have you met many? You described them really well.. I know a few white witches, but they tell me they are all about peace and I'm sure we had some on ALT? Or was that Wiccans? Or are they the same thing? Well you seem to be an expert in this field, so let me know.. Good luck in the contest..

Silent One
Date: 9/25/2023 1:10:00 AM

Oooh, I think everyone knows one or two... I wonder if you have to be a witch or a wizard to cast spells?

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/24/2023 12:35:00 PM

Not to worry brothaaa!!! I have spf 1000!!!! I won’t get burnt!!! But if they ask I can share!!! But they too busy hating for the burn!!! Like my girl riri said” shine bright like a diamond “ she forgot to say, put protection before looking at my shine !

Silent One
Date: 9/24/2023 12:32:00 PM

You've been inviting witches to the soup? OMG lol... Lioness, the witches I have met have only been online.. I hope they cant cast a spell virtually.. damn...

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/24/2023 12:26:00 PM

Aaaah brothaaaa… you met some??? What a small world me too!!!thats y they need spf50 to protect from too much shine!!! I Met some trolls tooo!!!! Up close n personal!!! UGLY LOOKING FELLASSSS I TELL YA!! They make a lot of jin noises!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 12:21:00 PM

Haha sara is a witch but witches and wiccans are not the same thing, sara is now on soup showed her before posting so she liked it, she especially loves last line so witch approved this is lolol thank u very much

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 9/24/2023 12:15:00 PM

Mmmmmmhmmmm!!! Yaaaz papi!!! Damn barnacles!!! Ruining perfectly crafted ships!!!! Like u said warlock of Witchery waving threefold fiction… useless ugly parasites!!!!! WORTHLESS!!! Indeed from worn out dry iced love spell… tsk! they need some good moisturizer in their life… FYI ….. I love what this piece is doin to me ae!

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/24/2023 12:48:00 PM

My lord and savior is with me !!!! This toad business is for the fairytales!!!! That’s y my mental illness dnt let me think um a witch!!!! Also pig ??? lol have you seen me??? Hahahhahaha the ain’t got shit on me!!!!

Silent One
Date: 9/24/2023 12:43:00 PM

When they turn you into a toad or a pig then you wont be laughing lol..

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/24/2023 12:38:00 PM

Aaaah I dnt care for “witches” they have irreparable mental illness.. tsk may god be with them!! Omg I was abt to tell abt this troll with the nose piercing !!! That one is the ugliest!!

Silent One
Date: 9/24/2023 12:33:00 PM

You know there will be witches reading your comment!!! Do you know the witch Shaista? She loves her darkness... lol

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/24/2023 12:29:00 PM

Parasites who dnt use moisturizer papi!!!! We talking abt that!!! They need protection from the burn!!! XD

Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 12:22:00 PM

Hahaha u are such a hater dnt hate on witches ill tell sara

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 9/24/2023 12:08:00 PM

What can I say , well said about the witches .