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Wistful Wisteria

WISTFUL WISTERIA wistful wisteria, lavender-hued and laden with grapelike produce. wistful like a willow. I’m hanging about the fence where buzzing bees remind me of life and death. amidst the ivy, the hum of hives, the lavender fruit of the eyes. wishful for paradise. 4/3/2022

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Date: 4/11/2022 2:46:00 AM
Hi Kim, You have composed a creative, concise yet colourful work. Like the imagery in your poem it is a joy to behold. Howard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2022 12:54:00 PM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 4/6/2022 3:52:00 PM
I like wisteria and your poem about it, Kim. Write On! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 6:09:00 PM
It is a pretty little plant!
Date: 4/5/2022 7:25:00 PM
The alliteration gives this cute poem a special feel ! Enjoyed your poem, Kim !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 4/5/2022 5:34:00 PM
Enjoyed the picture. Blessings ~ Debra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Date: 4/5/2022 10:50:00 AM
gorgeous imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 4/4/2022 5:40:00 PM
When you wist upon a star..! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2022 6:18:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/4/2022 7:46:00 AM
Love the use of alliteration and the short lines to create deep imagery, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2022 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jo!
Date: 4/3/2022 11:14:00 PM
Great use of alliteration. I love that climber. You composed a beautiful poem about it. Well done. A fave. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2022 5:24:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, dear one! ~ hugs

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