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Wishing Star

The sky has a star In darkness it shines With the shinny moon light This bright star stands out In the moon lit sky I make a big wish Then hope it comes true

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Marc Acrich

Date: 2/14/2018 7:20:00 AM

(: I don't want to leave stupid lines So I will just smile

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 1:00:00 PM

Hello Marc,I always make a wish on the shining star. I can see you smile. have a nice day my friend.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/13/2018 3:13:00 PM

You wish well Darlene! Enjoyed this shining hope today;-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2018 12:08:00 PM

Hello my friend.I always wish upon a star. Thank you my friend. Have a nice day my friend.

Lakiesha Edwards

Date: 1/8/2018 12:47:00 AM

Beautiful....The sky is such a beautiful place at night with all the shiny stars, I always wish upon a star... I love when I wish on the fallen star ??

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2018 12:12:00 PM

No the shining star.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2018 1:17:00 PM

I like it when the sky is blackand then all the shinny stars can be seen. Only one bright star stands out.. it is tha wishing star. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2017 2:22:00 PM

I like your wishing star, Darlene. I hope that all your wishes do come true! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/26/2017 5:17:00 PM

Hello Paul, I always make a wish upon a wishing star. Thank you for your lovely comment. I hope you had a Merry Christmas. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Regards Darlene.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2017 2:23:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Darlene :) - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2017 5:32:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and family. Have a nice evening my friend.

Silent One

Date: 12/23/2017 10:35:00 AM

This is so lovely Darlene...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2017 5:34:00 PM

Hello Silent One, Merry Christmas and a Happy New year to you and family. Have a nice evening my friend.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/22/2017 10:54:00 PM

Awesome poem!! Love the style and the words to this. Good job. :) -JW Earnings

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2017 5:41:00 PM

Hello JW Earnings, thank you for your lovely comment. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year.