At Peace

no longer sighing thinking of the time squandered on distorted illusions and dreams of the future naively wishing his youth away through the eyes of the child he was AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on April 21, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/22/2019 8:26:00 PM

You sigh... and then write a poem, making up for lost time ---however, irretrievable it may have seemed. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2019 9:24:00 PM

Loved your comment, Gershon. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2019 5:21:00 PM

yes if only we knew then what we know now!! (and yet, would be do much differently? I wonder!!)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2019 9:26:00 PM

We'll never know!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/22/2019 1:43:00 PM

Your poem expresses my feelings and often, my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2019 9:26:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.