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Wishes At the End of a Rainbow

High on the clouds, a lustrous sight Reflecting bend of arch’s delight As noon dips low, the late gust’s air Paints colors bright beyond compare… In tints that wave from pink to gold; Along curve’s end, I do behold Such longing to embrace its charms, To reach out gently with my arms In one rare moment, wishes call For burdens gone as lines enthrall… These hush-like breaths, these humble swings Impart a rainbow’s lit blessings; When at last, dear omen of peace Gifts our fine hearth with joy’s release! ----------------- What is at the end of your rainbow? Couplet form only Eve Roper's Contest 1/20/2016

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Date: 2/1/2016 4:40:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your couplet form win. Hugs **LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful words that flow to the rainbow.Congratulation, net!
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:25:00 PM
What a wonderful write, Nette. I so loved every word of this poem. Such heartfelt color and compassion. Congratulations on such a fantastic win. Well deserved!. A (7) for me and a favorite......God Bless, Sharon. : )
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:15:00 PM
A lovely write and terrific win Nette! Hugs
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:53:00 PM
Well done congrats a good poem x
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:34:00 PM
Nette,, Congratulations on your end of the rainbow win. Luv ** Skat
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:33:00 PM
Really poetic, your end of the rainbow. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:49:00 PM
Nette, such a beautiful poemcongratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:36:00 PM
Hi Nette, I am back again to congratulate you on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:24:00 PM
Absolutely delightful couplets Nette many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:54:00 PM
Nette a wonderful poem for a wonderful lady..*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/24/2016 8:52:00 AM
Lovely Nette.
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:00:00 AM
Nette, always in cadence and beauty.. =`) thanks much!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/21/2016 12:57:00 AM
Very nice, it gave me a wondrous grin reading this. : )
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Date: 1/20/2016 4:33:00 PM
So beautifully-written, Nette. I wish you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:22:00 PM
At the end of the rainbow you find your promised wish finding a pot of gold excellent piece of writing nette wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:23:00 PM
the mind gives us wonders of beauty very much enjoyed this entry, good luck in the contest:) -*Luv Linda*
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:06:00 PM
A beautiful write dear Nette. Best to you in the contest with this winner. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/20/2016 11:49:00 AM
Loved the lilting lines of your rainbow, Nette. All the best in the contest...huggs
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:28:00 AM
This is a prism of wonder, anticipation, and blessings given at rainbow's end. Very visual and heartfelt poem that inspires!
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:46:00 AM
Nette, a lovely write, I love the colors of your rainbow ~
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:10:00 AM
I loved rainbow since my childhood,and your powerful,colorful words painted the clearest rainbow in my mind of all I could fathom.A colorful write Nette,straight into fav.
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