Wishes

The sun sets slowly on my shoulder Squirrels are playing at the rocks and boulder There is glimmering green everywhere The skies are blue on this day so fair Across the hill, light shines from afar As the sun lowers, wishes rise to a star That may come shooting tonight with hope Streaks of light in the darkness, to cope Come and watch this beautiful sunset, with me In these mountains so welcoming and free Bring your wishes to let go in the light Watch them come true, after tonight! Heidi Sands 9/16/21

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/20/2021 5:43:00 AM

Heidi my friend sorry i have been scarce but work pressures are intense and have had little time for poetry soup. I do love this touching write and you are such a genuine person and poetess that I can almost see all your wishes coming true! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/20/2021 5:03:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kind comment Jennifer. Blessings to you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/17/2021 1:18:00 PM

Love sentiments Heidi, I hope all of your wishes do come true!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2021 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your support. Happy Friday :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/17/2021 3:47:00 AM

Beautiful, Heidi... Lovely imagery and great rhymes and flow...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2021 5:22:00 AM

Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2021 6:10:00 PM

Heidi, you've done an excellent job. This is a lovely way to spend the evening sky with someone special. Images fly across my mind as I read your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2021 6:45:00 PM

Thank you very much Lasaad. I am happy to see your kind comment :)