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Wish I Knew You When I Was Young

If only I knew you when I was young, maybe love’s melodies would be sung- We’d begin a life together so sweet, inhale your beauty through each lung, you’d sweep me off my delicate feet. It seems that wishes are for the weary, a way to escape a life of the leery- If moonbeams could’ve brought us together, maybe my eyes wouldn’t be so teary, and we’d grow old and gray until forever. When I was young I wish we were in love, soaring freely like an ivory dove- We’d laugh and stand a fighting chance, a gift of hope from the angels up above; a life we would’ve lived of passion and romance. Youth had its way and I knew not of you, it gave you innocence and made me blue- When God created time, I should’ve been your one and only dream come true- Oh, sweet man…if only I knew you when. Wish I Knew You When I Was Young November 20, 2017

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Date: 12/3/2017 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful ... congratulations..
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine win.
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:16:00 AM
This is so beautiful, and haunting at the same time, because we never know when we are young.. and some never get to know at all... Love some of the lines in this great poem..
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Date: 11/20/2017 10:12:00 AM
So well written, Luloo, I am sure this will do well in the contest:) P. S. Maybe we should try our collaboration (not for contest) as my muse is back (today)...
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Date: 11/20/2017 9:47:00 AM
So sweet. So emotional. I also hold same wish about a very specific person. Hugs.
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