Wish

dandelion spores scatter with a breath's wind~ I make a wish

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John Loving Iii

Date: 12/26/2009 12:11:00 PM

poluting everyones garden. jhl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Patricia. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:50:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 2:12:00 PM

I'm so glad to see this poem making it to round two, Patricia. Very nice haiku! Congratulations and merry Christmas, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:23:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

P Sheart

Date: 12/4/2009 7:25:00 PM

Hi Patricia, Love your name, smile, Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

Janette Fisher

Date: 12/3/2009 12:50:00 PM

Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Patricia. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2009 4:23:00 PM

uplifting! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/30/2009 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Patricia, on this sweet poem featured this week! Love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2009 11:33:00 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured Patricia >> James

John Freeman

Date: 11/30/2009 8:50:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Pat. Congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/30/2009 5:41:00 AM

Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/29/2009 6:58:00 PM

captivating wish! congrats on being featured this week!

Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi

Date: 11/29/2009 5:23:00 PM

you must really be quite acquainted with nature... ravishing fantasy.

Date: 11/29/2009 2:55:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen