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Wish-I-Was-In-A-Better-Place

Wish i was in a better place. To survive myself from this case. I know it is just a phase. Till I get God's grace. I think I'm sounding ungrateful. It's just that sometimes it gets painful. I got to Thank God and stay faithful. 'Cause graceful days are coming peaceful.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 2:20:00 AM

Yoni, nice to see this one again. PD

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 7:04:00 PM

Yoni Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care **SKAT**

Jennifer Neri

Date: 7/31/2014 12:44:00 PM

I love this! It has such a great flow and I'm sure many can relate

Linda Walden

Date: 7/29/2014 12:29:00 AM

Yoni, You write from your heart and that makes your words just flow. Such a painful, yet beautiful poem. Keep them flowing.....Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 5:47:00 PM

Yoni, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/15/2014 2:15:00 PM

Hi Yoni, this is such a deep, powerful write. Well done! Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2014 1:10:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Yoni :) - I choose your first moving and fine written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/15/2014 8:46:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Yoni. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2014 6:10:00 PM

Yoni, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

James Hyler

Date: 7/14/2014 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)