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Wisdom Tree

Wisdom Tree A solitary man Makes his way up the mountain One step at a time The life he knows further and further behind He wishes to be alone Away from the busyness The noise Responsibility Activity Work that is never done Conflict The need to be in control He reaches the mountain top Sits down and crosses his legs He looks out at the landscape His village a small mass of thatched roofs People unseeable Smoke rises from a central fire The lake so small it looks like it can fit into a wooden spoon The horizon surrounds him He feels the pebbles beneath him Blades of grass are myopically large He watches as the ants toil Are their lives not the same? Seasons change Summer to fall winter to spring He witnesses it all His beard lengthened As his mind enlarged Secrets have been revealed He’s disconnected yet part of all The base of him grows into the ground Others journey to the mountain top Seeking his wisdom They sit with him for a while Never staying for long Each person takes so that they may give The wise man transformed Arms outstretched reaching to all the horizons Now covered with leaves The seasons continue to change He sends his leaves down to the village Beckoning them to the mountain Not wanting to be alone "Come sit beneath my branches caress my bark smell my scent know my soul." He’s no longer is able to speak All that he knows resides in the rings of his seasons Still he offers wisdom Put your ear to his trunk You can still hear his heart beat His breath whistles through the leaves His seeds cover your woolen coat You are a solitary man making your way down the mountain One step at a time Closer and closer to your village To the ones you love As you walk through the village you shake the seeds off your coat They fall on the fertile ground The wise man has finally come home.

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Date: 10/10/2013 8:34:00 AM
Fantastic! Nature centers the circle of life. Such wisdom to be found there if we will only look for it and be open to it. I had to search for a while to find this, but it was worth it. Thanks for telling me about it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2013 9:59:00 AM
My pleasure Monterey, so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/27/2013 2:57:00 PM
Full circle visual.....again you bring the reader to the mountain.....nice work/Art. Thanks for sharing Scott The King of Gypsy's
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2013 7:23:00 AM
My Pleasure Gypsy King.
Date: 2/27/2013 6:52:00 AM
Tremendous transformation and offering of wisdom... Very reflective. You are very talented.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
You honor me Carol.
Date: 2/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
Kind of an epic journey through life and man's interconnectedness to all that surrounds him. Beautifully done Richard.
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Date: 2/26/2013 7:22:00 AM
Rick, a beautiful journey, so well written, I was drawn in from the first word, constance
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I hope all is well with you.
Date: 2/26/2013 12:46:00 AM
too good Richard..thnks for your precious comment on 'Valentine'..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Shah
Date: 2/25/2013 7:43:00 PM
wow~ the best poem in every sense when it comes to a man and his journey. ~SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 2/25/2013 5:46:00 PM
It seems you started out describing Moses on Mt. Sinai, but continuation of reading your work showed that was not the case. A good read nevertheless.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Robert
Date: 2/25/2013 5:32:00 PM
Ok for the several 'wow' Rick this is quite an adventure :) well written and well to be read, you really know how to bring your world become an inspiration to others , well done Rick! :D wishing you a wonderful afternoon there :D - hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 7:02:00 AM
Once again you make my day!
Date: 2/25/2013 2:49:00 PM
wowowow, this is GOOD work from you, Richard. One of your best and so wise and well crafted. I love the descriptions and how it is so surreal at the beginning particularly. Keep up your creative pen!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2013 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 2/25/2013 10:32:00 AM
the mind that creates this wondrous poem, the wisdom tree, is indeed the wises of all, or the wisdom tree would not exist at all...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2013 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Harry, what a nice thing to say. You have made me smile!
Date: 2/25/2013 4:44:00 AM
From dust to man to a wisdom tree, To leaves to seeds to dust he'll be - A cycle foretelling the journey we take, The road is rough the vision vague - We ache and toil in life seeking total win, Forgetting with Nature we are akin - But the cycle can ne'er be avoid of a mist, If harmony knew not how to exist!!! --- Richard, you have taken me into a never-ending journey!!!! Amazingly-written poem!! Super Good Work!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Jad. As always your response is so poetic.
Date: 2/24/2013 8:14:00 PM
Just awesome
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2013 8:29:00 PM
Thanks Donna
Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
Reminds me of a master storyteller named Jesus! :) Great write, Richard. So full and resonant with truth and meaning! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2013 6:56:00 PM
I am pleased you liked it

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