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Wisconsin Bluffs Without Dad

my bluffs are golden winter creeps near memories surround me cause me to tear each winding road I look up ahead wonder and glory "Son, have no fear!"

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Oleg Borisov

Date: 11/19/2009 11:10:00 AM

It is very poetic. And the way of conveying of the character`s feelings make me believe these lines. Good Luck. Oleg

Brian Strand

Date: 6/23/2009 11:39:00 PM

Lovely memory expressed with such tender words Jim.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

Date: 6/22/2009 3:59:00 PM

The heart seem to produce some peace, In this writing, enjoyed the read, James!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2009 1:50:00 PM

beautiful tribute from a loving dad to another,looking up ahead where the angels,our loved ones are in glory--awesome jim

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/22/2009 12:04:00 PM

Great tribute and superb ending. Well done. Regards Heidie

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/21/2009 8:18:00 AM

Beautiful tribute Jim. This is full of emotional energy that touches the heart.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/20/2009 7:57:00 AM

You are such a talent and your poems about dad is truly wonderful...I am feeling this so much Jim..another father's day without my dad who passed when I was twenty one...your poem is working on my heart brother....great work.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/20/2009 6:50:00 AM

Tender words....simply said, and touches my heart, James. Love can be said in the smallest way....that last line says it all. ~ Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2009 10:12:00 PM

I was feeling sad tonight thinking about my first Father's Day without Dad. Your poem helps me realize he would have wanted me to look forward to the rest of my life with "wonder and glory." I know there is sadness here, but it's good to focus on the positive, eh? Happy Father's Day to you, James. Love, Carolyn