Winterscape

rigid Icy sails…
rain splashes oyster shells
churning ocean swells
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lee Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Nice job on the haiku... i'm just learning other than different forms...thanks
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:43 AM
You have described a seacoast in winter rather well with this haiku. Good job.
Situation Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:37 AM
a little change of scenery. much better than people writing about spring time in the middle of winter. like flowers are going to bloom through the snow any minute. T.S.
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