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Winterscape

rigid Icy sails… rain splashes oyster shells churning ocean swells

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 12:06:00 PM
Nice job on the haiku... i'm just learning other than different forms...thanks
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:43:00 AM
You have described a seacoast in winter rather well with this haiku. Good job.
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:37:00 AM
a little change of scenery. much better than people writing about spring time in the middle of winter. like flowers are going to bloom through the snow any minute. T.S.
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