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Winter's Kiss

The bird’s house is capped with a snow drop. The bird’s bath is a mushroom like form. The branches all groan, snap, crackle, pop, with the weight of the night’s snow so borne. The cat’s on the rug near kitchen vent. The furnace is pumping out more heat. The tea kettle’s whistling with intent. The old gal settles down with a sweet. The car’s all shrouded, a sheet of white. The trellis is a grand work of art. Outdoors the benches all gleam with ice. The new moon’s a rare, randy, upstart. Darkness descends will a muffled whisper. She sips tea and remembers who’s kissed her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2011 10:23:00 PM
Love this ,Deb. Too bad you can't win top three this time, coz this one rocks! And congrats getting thru two in the finals.
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Date: 3/26/2011 10:23:00 PM
by the way. I am unable to respond to your soupmail for some reason. there was no reply thing inside it. But what do you want me to help you with haiku? I wish I had time for that. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:20:00 AM
Winter is one of my favorite subjects Debbie. I see you have all three of your poems past the first round, congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Debbie. Love Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:57:00 AM
mmmmm........maybe my favorite.....earl grey with double-bergamot!!
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Debbie, on you poems being selected for the next round. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:00:00 AM
Oh, this is so cozy. I can get into the scene. The tea tastes great. I'm so thankful to be inside enjoying - so is the dog (or cat) Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Deb, on your sonnet "Winter's Kiss" being featured. You draw quite a portrait with your words. Vince
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:33:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:09:00 AM
I love the winter setting here ... well crafted, a broad brushed mural with an intricate color scheme ... winter's white beauty. Thanks for your kind comments, Deb, you are forever my friend.
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:04:00 PM
Great images of the winter scene as seen through the eyes of the "old gal," Deborah. I had a good laugh reading the last line! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:34:00 AM
A joy to read Deborah >> James
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Date: 1/6/2010 11:04:00 AM
Very Beautiful and lovely Poem. Very lucid and vivid in describing the winter's homely scene including the tea kettle's whistling. Thanks for a lovely reading and many thanks for your beautiful comments on my poem Flow River flow. Hope you would like the boatman's Song as well. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/3/2010 3:49:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOH! Love this one, Deb. Lainie
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:49:00 PM
Beautiful Poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:35:00 PM
Oh My Goodness Deborah. ~~~Magnificent~~~ writing. This one is going to my Favorites. (first of the year). Don't stop now you go girl. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:53:00 AM
This is such a fine moment, a fine reflection in the midst of winter's beauty. Love it! Stay off the bottle, Deb. I've been dry for a number of years. Just had to reminisce on lush times. Love, daver
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Date: 1/2/2010 1:17:00 AM
You are the 'mistress ' of this genre Debbie.Thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/2/2010 12:22:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/1/2010 11:27:00 PM
nicely written, love this line 'The branches all groan snap, crackle, pop,'
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Date: 1/1/2010 9:35:00 PM
Delightful write, Debbie! Full of imagery, rhyme and warmth for this cold day! Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:43:00 PM
Debrah, wonderful visual in this Sonnet! Love the ending, smile. Is your heart beaming! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Take care Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:09:00 PM
Deborah~ Great imagery in this delightful poem! Love Laura :)
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