Winter's Kiss

The bird’s house is capped with a snow drop.
The bird’s bath is a mushroom like form.
The branches all groan, snap, crackle, pop,
with the weight of the night’s snow so borne.

The cat’s on the rug near kitchen vent.
The furnace is pumping out more heat.
The tea kettle’s whistling with intent.
The old gal settles down with a sweet.

The car’s all shrouded, a sheet of white.
The trellis is a grand work of art.
Outdoors the benches all gleam with ice.
The new moon’s a rare, randy, upstart.

Darkness descends will a muffled whisper.
She sips tea and remembers who’s kissed her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 10:23 PM
by the way. I am unable to respond to your soupmail for some reason. there was no reply thing inside it. But what do you want me to help you with haiku? I wish I had time for that. Luv,Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Love this ,Deb. Too bad you can't win top three this time, coz this one rocks! And congrats getting thru two in the finals.
Brumley Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Winter is one of my favorite subjects Debbie. I see you have all three of your poems past the first round, congratulations!
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Debbie. Love Carol
Goff Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:57 AM
mmmmm........maybe my favorite.....earl grey with double-bergamot!!
Scripca Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations, dear Debbie, on you poems being selected for the next round. Love, Iolanda
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Congrats Debbie on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
Austin Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Oh, this is so cozy. I can get into the scene. The tea tastes great. I'm so thankful to be inside enjoying - so is the dog (or cat) Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Debbie. Love, Carol
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February 21, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congrats Deb, on your sonnet "Winter's Kiss" being featured. You draw quite a portrait with your words. Vince
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
Shango Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 10:09 AM
I love the winter setting here ... well crafted, a broad brushed mural with an intricate color scheme ... winter's white beauty. Thanks for your kind comments, Deb, you are forever my friend.
Devonshire Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Great images of the winter scene as seen through the eyes of the "old gal," Deborah. I had a good laugh reading the last line! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 10:34 AM
A joy to read Deborah >> James
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January 6, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Very Beautiful and lovely Poem. Very lucid and vivid in describing the winter's homely scene including the tea kettle's whistling. Thanks for a lovely reading and many thanks for your beautiful comments on my poem Flow River flow. Hope you would like the boatman's Song as well. With best wishes and love Ravindra
George   Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 3:49 AM
OOOOOOOOOOH! Love this one, Deb. Lainie
Owens Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Beautiful Poem...Enjoyed...Marty
Brown Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Oh My Goodness Deborah. ~~~Magnificent~~~ writing. This one is going to my Favorites. (first of the year). Don't stop now you go girl. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 6:53 AM
This is such a fine moment, a fine reflection in the midst of winter's beauty. Love it! Stay off the bottle, Deb. I've been dry for a number of years. Just had to reminisce on lush times. Love, daver
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January 2, 2010 at 1:17 AM
You are the 'mistress ' of this genre Debbie.Thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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January 2, 2010 at 12:22 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
Byrne Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 11:27 PM
nicely written, love this line 'The branches all groan snap, crackle, pop,'
Haick Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Delightful write, Debbie! Full of imagery, rhyme and warmth for this cold day! Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
Sheart Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Debrah, wonderful visual in this Sonnet! Love the ending, smile. Is your heart beaming! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Take care Love Light Patty
Mckenzie Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Deborah~ Great imagery in this delightful poem! Love Laura :)
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