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Does my spirea still bloom? No! It has turned black and crumbles Where are the tiger lilies with their spots? Hidden beneath the cold, wet earth until.... Did I not have peonies in two colors? They disappeared, my love, but not dead Only hidden deep within my heart Waiting for the ignition of my low simmering flame

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Date: 3/12/2022 10:37:00 AM
I like this! Especially that last line-- a belated congrats Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/13/2022 4:01:00 AM
Thank you, L. J. I appreciate the with with congrats. Sara
Date: 3/8/2022 6:35:00 PM
Somehow different from you Sara, and yes very beautiful
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Date: 3/9/2022 3:33:00 AM
Yes, Harry, this one is a little different. I looked out the window and the lush summer flowers were still hidden what was above ground was all black, dead and crumbly. I thought sometimes I feel like my garden looks. Your visits delight me. Sara
Date: 3/8/2022 10:32:00 AM
GREAT symbolism , Sara. I really like this one
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Date: 3/8/2022 2:26:00 PM
I think you are the only one who seemed to catch onto the symbolism. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 3/6/2022 2:05:00 PM
I love this poem Sara . You are truly a nature lover and know your flowers so well . Your imagery and knowledge of flowers, colours and plants is outstanding. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/8/2022 2:29:00 PM
Jennifer, Well, I don't know as much as some others but I know a few species. There are so many wonderful species out there in this wonderful world in which we live. Your visit was uplifting. Sara
Date: 3/5/2022 8:15:00 AM
Great imagery, Sara ! Though the flowers haven't yet blossomed, there is hope that they will bloom once spring arrives ! It is this hope that keeps us on ! Lovely write !
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Date: 3/5/2022 3:18:00 PM
Valsa, We do have some blossoms on the trees and some blooming of Jonquils and daffodils with pollen increasing each day but spring isn't officially here yet. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 3/4/2022 3:08:00 PM
Hi Sara, I enjoyed your well-written and clever write. Especially the second stanza and it worked so well with the photo. Thanks for sharing this write. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2022 3:57:00 AM
Alexis, Thank you for the visit. Your comments were inspiring. Sara
Date: 3/4/2022 7:55:00 AM
love this clever write, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2022 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 3/3/2022 3:52:00 PM
Great imagery and metaphor; beautifully penned.
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Date: 3/4/2022 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, M.L. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 3/2/2022 1:00:00 PM
So sweet Sara, how we miss our flowers in winter! But soon, the snow will melt, a new day will dawn and the garden flowers will bloom anew! Hope you are having a very blessed, and may I add, warm and sunny day! God bless you Sara <3 ~BJ
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Date: 3/4/2022 2:48:00 PM
It has warmed up here, B.J., I think maybe at least 80 today but it drops down at night still. I enjoy the sun coming through the windows every day that it does. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Date: 3/1/2022 6:01:00 PM
Lovely poem Sara. The picture was sweet. Blessings ~ Debra
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Debra. I liked that picture also. I think about it when we have a little disagreement. Your visit was inspiring. Sara
Date: 3/1/2022 4:36:00 PM
Those flowers are meeting quite the challenge. Spring is coming! Spring is coming! There's still hope. Smiles and blessings, Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2022 2:40:00 PM
Bill, We need that hope about this time of year. It has warmed up here during the day and invites us to go outside. Thanks for the visit to my page with your words of hope. Sara
Date: 3/1/2022 3:53:00 PM
What a beautiful poem of hope still blooming in the winter - waiting for "the ignition of my low simmering flame." Lovely work Sara. Blessings to and for your heart!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2022 2:36:00 PM
Sam, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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