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Winter's Afterglow Collaboration With Mystic Rose

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Awaken, white and yellow daffodils Entice the honeybees and butterflies Bring back the blue birds to my window sill So I can hear those spring time lullabies Arouse oh robins, welcome in the green I long to smell the scent of fresh cut grass Just splash some color, nothing too obscene A harbinger that winter soon will pass Arrange the sun, that it may tilt just so upon my shoulders warm as summer's eve The spring ensues the winter's afterglow And brings with it a touch of sweet receive Let colors dance together in our dreams And bathe with love's ensemble by the stream Written by Mystic Rose and Daniel Turner Thank you Vie for collaborating with me on this sonnet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/12/2017 10:32:00 PM
So many good thoughts of spring and winter. Your words bring pictures into my mind of both.
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:11:00 PM
Great collaboration...7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/25/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph:)
Date: 1/23/2017 7:10:00 PM
You bring in the sunshine...great duet my friends...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Wingman. I enjoyed writing with MR. She's a hoot:)
Date: 1/23/2017 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful! You two make magic together! I was inspired by this awesome collaboration! Bravo! : ) 7
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Date: 1/23/2017 4:11:00 PM
Thank you, Mrs Connie. She is a lovely and special Rose:)
Date: 1/22/2017 10:19:00 AM
Lovely poetry and a great Sonnet ... A balm for boredom of thoughts ...
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Date: 1/23/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. You are so kind:)
Date: 1/22/2017 9:22:00 AM
This is lovely you two. It felt like spring here yesterday with sunshine and 60 degree weather.
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:55:00 AM
Yeah, it stormed it here yesterday. Winter monsoon season here. Thanks for dropping by Tim:)
Date: 1/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
Wonderful job you two!
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Date: 1/22/2017 7:38:00 AM
Lovely and colourful collaboration, Daniel and Vie:) a 7 for this beauty:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/22/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Jo:)
Date: 1/22/2017 7:25:00 AM
- A truly beautiful co- write from both of you, Daniel & Vie Rose :) - hugs & a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/22/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. It's always a pleasure when you visit:)
Date: 1/21/2017 5:58:00 PM
Daniel what a beautiful vibrant sonnet it is a delight to read your lovely collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/22/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Jan:) I appreciate your support.
Date: 1/21/2017 5:56:00 PM
Lovely collaboration! Come Spring!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/22/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Kim:)

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