Winter Wonderland

WINTER WONDERLAND The snowmen line the silent street at night. Their bright smiles gleam with frozen teeth of stone. Until the crackle of a bunny’s light — its paws so sweetly greet the dark alone. His fluffy fur, does mimic, soft snow sown. His beady red eyes blink at Jack Frost’s throne. Then dawn spurs pinkish pride upon the land. The sun does tease a melt, but won’t deprive the children’s vacation of all ‘tis planned. They dash with suits and gloves and boots to drive their old and new gay sleighs, red cheeks alive — the snow does fly, like buzzing bees of hive. The wild prints scar, delight, the cache of snow. A springer gnaws the fallen carrot prize. The skates relentlessly slide to and fro, the cheers of fright and glee from hills arise. At bottom rung — sure thing — a snowball flies. As moms call each, they sigh and wave sad byes. This Winter wonderland delights all things. At angel’s excitement, the church bell rings. 12/26/2018 Contest: Winter Wonderland Sponsor: Emile Pinet
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Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, Line!
Pinet Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations Kim, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, due to the exacting syllable counts and perfect rhyme requirements this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much! Honored to be on your list!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 11:48 AM
A gorgeous sonnet, full of metaphoric delight if you ask me. Good luck in the contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Thanks so much, Caren! A hearty hig <3 Kim
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Great Sonnet, great imagery, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Green Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:07 AM
This was absolutely enchanting Kim. This has First Place written all over it.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you for that! We will see. Blessings, Chris!
Pandit Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 8:50 AM
WOW! This is such a splendid write, Kim. Enjoyed it from start to finish. Brilliantly done..a winning poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! XX Kim
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