Paula Goldsmith Poet Tanka

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The Good Old Days Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Suzette Richards 

Winter Wishes

Cold wet winter winds 
plenty of snow to play in 
snowmen to build ~ sleds. 
Hot chocolate to drink up, 
soft furry blanket ~ cuddle.  
 


Date Written: 12/2/2021 

4 Place 

Winter Wishes Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Connie Marcum Wong December 23, 2021 at 12:03 PM It is so much fun to play in the snow, no matter the age. To give a snowman your own personal touch making it unique is so much fun. I love your poem my friend. Have a wonderful holiday filled with joy. Blessings xxoo Paula Goldsmith December 24, 2021 at 6:05 AM Thank You, for writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you love this fun snow write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Mystic Rose Rose December 18, 2021 at 1:03 PM sounds all cozy and lovable, thank you for sharing dear Paula, congrats on your win, love :) Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2021 at 11:42 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. What could be more lovable then a soft furry blanket and big mug of hot chocolate??? Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Sam Kauffman December 15, 2021 at 12:27 PM Congratulations Paula on your win. Your tanka is such a slice of winter joy - especially the cuddly blankets and hot cocoa! Sending you blessings! Paula Goldsmith December 16, 2021 at 11:16 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my winter write. The soft furry blankets and hot chocolate is what the winter is all about. Have a blessed day.............

Beata Agustin December 15, 2021 at 1:10 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. A blessed Christmas to you and your family. God bless you. Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:48 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. "Merry Christmas" Have a blessed day.............

Christuraj Alex December 14, 2021 at 10:35 PM Wow! Very practical wishes. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:47 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun snow write. Have a blessed day.............

Susan Ashley December 14, 2021 at 7:47 PM Dear Paula, I adore your beautiful poem, it perfectly expresses the fun snow days that I loved while I was growing up.. I still love playing in the snow hehe! Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:46 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you had fun playing in my winter snow write. Have a blessed day.............

Jan Allison December 14, 2021 at 3:49 PM wonderful winter tanka, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun winter Tanka write. Have a blessed day.............

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2021 at 3:44 PM what a cute tanka. Congrats, Paula!! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Tanka write. Have a blessed day.............

P.S. Awtry December 14, 2021 at 2:27 PM Paula, lovely wishes! Congratulations :) Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:42 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Winter Wishes. Have a blessed day.............

Constance La France December 14, 2021 at 1:12 PM Paula, congratulations on your win in Chantelle's Winter Wishes contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:41 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Winter Wishes write. Have a blessed day.............

Edward Ebbs December 14, 2021 at 12:45 PM I can see this…congrats - Ed :) Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2021 at 10:40 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you can see this fun winter's day write. Have a blessed day.............

Sotto Poet December 14, 2021 at 10:52 AM Wonderful poem, Paula. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Kindest wishes Paula Goldsmith December 14, 2021 at 11:50 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this winter write. Have a blessed day.............

Paul Callus December 3, 2021 at 12:25 PM I love the contrast between the two parts of this poem _ the cold outside and the warmth inside. ~ Best regards, Paula. // paul Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2021 at 9:56 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like the contrast between the two. Yes, go outside and get cold having fun then come inside for hot chocolate and a blanket. A great day in the snow/winter. Have a blessed day.............

Delice Arleen Skelly December 3, 2021 at 4:31 AM Lovely winter wishes. Hot chocolate and a blanket sound so good after the snow...Delice Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2021 at 7:08 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my fun snow day write. Yes, hot chocolate and a blanket are great after playing in the snow. Have a blessed day.............

Tom Cunningham December 2, 2021 at 1:17 PM You captured the winter scene well Paula, good luck in the contest. Tom Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2021 at 7:06 AM Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun winter write. Have a blessed day.............

L Milton Hankins December 2, 2021 at 12:38 PM Wonderful winter tanka, Paula. Best of luck in the contest! Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2021 at 7:04 AM Thank You, for writing and for your luck. Glad you like my Winter Wishes write. Have a blessed day.............

Heidi Sands December 2, 2021 at 12:21 PM I enjoyed this. I like the soft blanket to cuddle :) Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2021 at 7:02 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you enjoyed my Winter Wishes. A soft blanket to cuddle is the best. Have a blessed day.............